I don't know what to say As you turn away Glance over your shoulder A precarious display Of your back and face You look puzzled I begin to speak My story sounds bleak Confused Words misused I fumble for clues To what you are feeling
We walk among the ruins Of our childish games We talk about the world I know will never be the same Again I feel this sorrow Riddled with endless shame I'll never be the same
The cure for my Illness Lies In the touch of your skin Your body reassures me I still don't know Where to begin I give in To this lust Welling inside As you shed your disguise
We walk among the ruins Of our childish games We talk about the world I know will never be the same Again I feel this sorrow Riddled with ruthless pain I'll never be the same
The sorrow I face Reeks of "Arsenic and Old Lace" I try to retrace Where our love went wrong You look puzzled I begin to speak My story sounds bleak Confused Words misused I fumble for clues To what you are feeling
dear poet, well done, simple and easy. i like that line;-"I know will never be the same Again I feel this sorrow Riddled with ruthless pain I'll never be the same"-
its really nice, good work. SABEEL.
a_broken_frameOPBlue Springs, Missouri USAJul 29, 2009
Thanks for the kind words
ohio19Dayton, Ohio USAOct 20, 2009
great poem i enjoyed it well written
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 22, 2009
Very well written poem a_broken_frame.Thanks for sharing
a_broken_frameOPBlue Springs, Missouri USADec 15, 2009
Thank you so much...
GembowFranklin, Georgia USADec 15, 2009
hey man nice trick to boost your poems back to the top and crowd the rest of us out. You could stand to be more polite.
a_broken_frameOPBlue Springs, Missouri USADec 15, 2009
To Gembow: So...to you...thanking people is a trick? Your loss. Good thing I don't care about your opinion AT all.
a_broken_frameOPBlue Springs, Missouri USADec 15, 2009
To Wildfire: That particular piece was written for somebody close and the movie was one we watched regularly together and laughed at together quite often. Thanks for the kind words.
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well done,
simple and easy.
i like that line;-"I know will never be the same
Again
I feel this sorrow
Riddled with ruthless pain
I'll never be the same"-
its really nice, good work.
SABEEL.