Trying Not To Cry

...And she came dancing
From the cupboard, shattered dreams
Biggest eyes, brightest smile
Brushing dust away
Remnants of domesticity
She danced, She twirled
Before my eyes

In the air
Notes
A duet for Mother and child
Cascading down, filling my ears
My mind wanders to the question:
What might have been?
The pain of wasted tears

She
She is trying
She is trying not to cry

Wiping sleep out of your mind
Rising early every morn
From the closet of the duties of a good wife
You take the mask you wore
The day before

In the air
Steps
A dance for Mother and child
Trickle down, drowning my eyes
My mind wanders to hope
What is yet to come?
To the answer to all the "whys?"

She
She is trying
She is trying not to cry

Won't you ever see
Can't stand to taste your pain
Words drip off my tongue
In my nostrils, rain
Drops feel
Like footseps
Sounding in the cloisters

If you should ever find yourself
Your heart upon a shelf
Push pride aside
Let me find the woman deep inside
That you've hidden, carefully
Behind jars
Broken
Promises
Lies

She
She is trying
She is trying not to cry
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Posted: Jul 2009

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gypsylotts
A lovely poem. I like the way one can actually feel how 'sadness' is kept hidden "Behind jars/Broken/Promises/Lies.

I think sadness is most tragic when it is underplayed. The poem reminded me, for some reason, of lines from H.W Longfellow's poem (The Day is Done):

A feeling of sadness and longing,
That is not akin to pain,
And resembles sorrow only
As the mist resembles the rain.

All the best.
Cheers
a_broken_frame
Thank very much for the kind words Gypsy.
QuietStormF
Amazing poem.. amazing words.. Love it!
a_broken_frame
Thank you very much, Storm. Very kind words.
ButterflySparks
.....AWESOME head banger banana dancing
a_broken_frame
Thanks Sparky applause
jazzy75
Beautifully written...I love the images - the emotional picture you paint.thumbs up
gypsyheart
very well expressed a_broken_frame-full of emotionhug bouquet
a_broken_frame
Thanks a lot Jazzy and Gypsy. Very kind words.
sshore
amazing poetry
thank you!
applause
a_broken_frame
Thank you very much sshores
ohio19
dont cry i believe that your strongteddybear sad flower sad flower
a_broken_frame
Thanks Ohio,,,again very kind sentiment, Much appreciated.
SUMMIT09
teddybear FOR UNDERSTANDING THE DEPTH OF LOVE PAIN PRIDE
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