If I Fell Apart

Sitting alone again
In this house filled with tears
Sitting alone again
Enveloped in my fears
Staring at your blank face
Wondering what to say
Are there any words in me
That could make this go away

Sitting alone again
You across the room
If I were to speak right now
Would it be too soon?
With every glance I toss at you
This moment lingers on
Everytime I think of what to say
I turn and you are gone

If I fell apart
Would you put me back together?
If I lost my way
Would you find me?

So, here I sit alone again
I finally know what I should say
But here I sit alone again
With you a thousand miles away
Will I ever find my way back to you,
Has this path come to it's end?
Do we even have the strength in us
To find a way to mend?

If I fell apart
Would you put me back together?
If I lost my way
Would you find me?
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Posted: Aug 2009

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sabeel
dear poet, well done..dancing dancing
well written, nice words..
are you alone ? waiting for someone..?
best of luck , dear poet..
sabeel.teddybear
a_broken_frame
Thank you very much for the kind words. That was written when I was breaking up with my ex-wife.
QuietStormF
Very nice.. once again..teddybear
a_broken_frame
Thank you very much Storm. Means a lot :)
shhores
just couldnt help it.its so real so tender, sad
brokenframe
shhores
i am sorry i commented
a_broken_frame
No I"m sorry I didn't see your comment until today sshores. I apprecaite the comment. Thank you very very much.
shhores
thankyou again for such beauty gentle soft sad........
thumbs up purple heart gift
gypsyheart
yeah thats real feelings i can relate to...been there before.Very nicely expressed a_broken_framehug bouquet
a_broken_frame
Again...thank you shhores and thank youas well Gypsy. Very kind words from both of you. I'm glad that I could touch you with my words.
profiler
great poem and yes i found you! Love profiler/fire in the sky
Redrose2009
Well-done!
a_broken_frame
Thanks Profiler and Redrose...kind words very much appreciated.
penceng
Very touch... and hope soon you are not be alone any morecheers
fareaway
your poem is so beautiful so soft like a lingering whisper
i love it!
thumbs up gift
jazzy75
a_broken_frame, i know this feeling. you have expressed it eloquently...thank you. teddybear
Sunnn
Lovely song!
Comprehensible and touchy.
a_broken_frame
Thank you very much Pen, Fare, Jazz and Sunn. Very kind words indeed. Much love to you all and much appreciation.
ohio19
you have talent this is a great poem never stop believing in your self some one out there wont let you fall apartconversing
a_broken_frame
Thanks Ohio. My appreciations can't be expressed enough :)
tomboygirl
this very real-and very male somehow..
a_broken_frame
I think, because I'm male, I might need that explained to me lol. I take it as a compliment though. Thank you.
Andy1905
wow bud !!!!!!!
Ive been there not a nice feeling
and its still raw for me so ewrm well done and no you're not the only one thinking like you dohelp roll eyes
a_broken_frame
Thanks Andy, appreciate it
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