It is not a big deal to start, anything Even if we are not aware about its result It may be the first reason to ruin our life We will recognize that we never wants to continue, after it started And we cannot stop it, at the right time bcaz it is not easy to stop as it, we started...
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
we will start anything easly ,but fails to stop if does not like to continue.
DEAR POET, thank you , for your kind words, you are little different from others.. keep it.. sabeel.
Marie_CurieDublin, IrelandAug 6, 2009
Would it not be a little better to put a bit of rhyme into it or use words as metaphors or symbolism for what you are trying to say. It's just that it sounds a little too much like your writing sentences. The idea is basically good but it lacks the imagination to convey it in an artfull way. Art is about saying or painting something in a different way then would ordinarily be conveyed or seen. I don't mean to hurt your feelings but feel people are been to nice here and are not been constructive in their comments. People who want to be poets will not master their art unless there is constructive dialogue.
dear marie curie... i am very happy to read your comment. i welcome all commets to do better next time.. i am not a poet, but wiiling to be a poet. every artist may mistakes at their first time.. later they will be right.. i hope you will read my all poems if u have a littile time and hope to make valueable comment. any way thank you very much. sabeel.
Comments (9)
thank you very much about your comment.
sabeel.
thanks for sharing
sabeel.
when someone start something they see it through or end it before it's to late.
thanks for your kind comment.
thank you,
sabeel.
thank you , for your kind words,
you are little different from others.. keep it..
sabeel.
i am very happy to read your comment.
i welcome all commets to do better next time..
i am not a poet, but wiiling to be a poet. every artist may mistakes at their first time..
later they will be right..
i hope you will read my all poems if u have a littile time and hope to make valueable comment.
any way thank you very much.
sabeel.