gemeh22
gemeh22
layton, Utah, USA
Jun 2010
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take my hand

take my hand
hold me close
feel my body up against yours
feel my breath upon you
press your lips to mine
let me breathe you in
hold me close to you
lay your head upon my chest
feel my heartbeat
lay with me and let me love you
give yourself to me
take my hand

teddybear teddybear teddybear
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MovinFWD
MovinFWD●Daytona Beach, Florida USA
Jun 12, 2010●16 Comments
#1
Ummmm, OK. Wouldn't have to ask me twice. wave wave hug kiss
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gemeh22
gemeh22OP●layton, Utah USA
Jun 12, 2010●4 Blogs●30 Comments
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blushing blushing wave kiss kiss
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larchee
larchee●LasVegas, Nevada USA
Jun 12, 2010●4 Comments
#3
thumbs up thumbs up Take my Hand...like how it goes back and repeats itself from beginning to end and from end to beginning,at least my interpretation,like never ending love.That would be something!!
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Venusruled
Venusruled●Golden, Colorado USA
Jun 12, 2010●724 Comments
#4
Gemeh, lovely poem! Very romantic!teddybear bouquet
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gemeh22
gemeh22OP●layton, Utah USA
Jun 12, 2010●4 Blogs●30 Comments
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thank youwave wave hug hug
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tomin
tomin●Salmiya, Hawalli Kuwait
Jun 13, 2010●7 Blogs●32 Comments
#6
Though said so many times ,so many ways, love never loses its charm ,and this little poem expresses love’s yearnings tenderly and sincerely.
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hankharlow
hankharlow●Union, New Jersey USA
Jun 14, 2010●131 Comments
#7
So much meaning in a few special words. Beautiful.
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Im an affection person who likes affection in return, Looking for friends who i can enjoy being around and make me laugh. I love to dance - mainly techno girl haa haa but like most all types of music except maybe rap R&B. love to read , spend time wi [read more]

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