Finding You

Your hand brushes softly against mine
and my body tremble's
Your words speak to me
and I stutter in response
Your lips looks so delicately soft
I want to hide my childish face
Never so much have I needed anything
And now I feel like I can't live without you
My heart stops in the moment of this realization
My dreams are no longer mine
and love I never thought I had
surpasses everything else
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That is what love is heart beating , I couldn't have said it any better myself ,

As I read this I hope someday I can have that same feeling for my soul mate someday when I do find her kiss
singleman4you, took the word out of my mouth...;-)
I just hope its not in the retirement village...;-)))))
Carobnjak3....nothing like love in the retirement village to keep you on your toes...hhhmmmm...love in the twilight years...you'll be in heaven way before your body gives way...laugh
I must let you know that I am strongly suspecting that this poem was dedicated to me.

lol ..


Cheers.
@ben

LMAO!! LMAO!! LMAO!!
yummmmmmmmmmmy!!!!!!!!!!
There is no love wich pierces the heart
like the love of a woman.
Oh the blessed curse of love,
both serpent, and heavenly dove.
I have loved, and never felt love in return,
And this sweet form, is for what I most yearn.
Oh heart, deceptive heart, why must you taunt,
while for others, her gifts does she flaunt.
Where is the start for which I desire,
To hold the hand for which my heart does fire.
Yet she fears the reason I yet live,
because his forgivness did he give.
How shall I ever be loved by her now
Oh please dear Savior,
work this out some how.
I need you now, I dont want to be alone
Grace me again, with the favor you have shown.
And from her love, I shall see.
How to love you more, as you love me.
I am lost, in my own mind,
for her sweet pitty is always so kind.
At this moment, She fears me more
Only my love do I have in store.
Please teach me to gain her hand,
and for this sweet thing to fight, and stand.
For if you grant me this precious glee.
I do promise I will never flee.
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