Feelings

No, you’re right.
I mistook our endless conversations,
Your sweet texts,
The compliments,
And our amazing moments for you liking me.
My bad.
Maybe I’m over.
Maybe I’ve moved on.
Maybe I like someone else.
But maybe,
I’m just a good liar.
My time has come,
And so I’m gone.
To a better place, far beyond.
I love you all as you can see.
But its better now,
Because I’m free.
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Nice blog....i think you had better to free.dancing
wave David, thank youblushing
Novi, comfort Because its meant to end. Hope you are okay now.
wave Shay, thank you so much. I'm fine. Its only a poem. No connection with the old man that I wrote it before. Ye, I also mean to end everything. And its end now.

Have a nice day Shayhug teddybear
11th line is an Asian desease, why?
Asian desease? what you mean by that?

Let me tell you, Asian woman culture, woman can't express her feeling just like that. We should hide it cause its not polite if woman start the action first. Still very old fashion for some of us, but now many women used modern way.

And for my poem, the story is about a player man who played her feeling, even the woman said " She's DONE " but deep in heart she still love that player man.
Boy67, I can sense stereotyping in your comment. Lying is a disease for Asian women? Other women from other races don't lie? Oh c'mon! If you had been lied by an Asian woman before confront her. Don't judge us (all) by saying we have the disease. I do lie too. Everybody lies.
Well said Shaythumbs up thumbs up thumbs up
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