thriller (a true haunted story)

it was footsteps. i swear it was footsteps .on the wooden roof under the tiles. i woke up in the middle of the night by the boots ,walking over my head. i thought ,i mistook and the sounds were form the corridor ,outside my bedroom.i kept hearing footsteps loud and clear , from the cieling. jumped out of my bed and turned on the lights . the sound of the boot steps didnt stop.cold sweat was running on my forehead.
it seemed a bad idea by now ,
spending my night over the old house of my grandparents.
i heard me whispering:grandpa , grandma???????
both dead some years back.I shuddered , as the boots stopped walking over me . a cold breeze went throu my body. strange ,cause the windows were
sealed .blues moping help dunno
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They just wanted to let you know they were there watching over you comfort wave
B O O !!!!!!!!!!!! crazy crazy crazy
@RED
never scared that much in my lifesigh wow yay
I can only imagine. hug comfort uh oh
@red
i am a reasonable man and ghosts dont fit in my world doh roll eyes
Blue

do you really think they were ghost ???????????
@bec
tell u the truth. first i thought it was mice ,running over me and in the small space , between the roof and the tiles. ,less than 2 feet, maximum high, but the sound , was like boots walking on a wooden floor. so???confused dunno uh oh
I do believe in some cases that these things do happen, though I have never seen it myself. uh oh
Yup, they want you Blue to go with them but you have to perform a ritual in the living room with the lights out. You don't need candles but you need some sweet smelling cider wood. Cut it up into 3 cm lengths ( symbol that there are three of you there ). Draw three lines on the floor in the center of the room, pointing to the center of a circle , place the pieces of wood in the center where you will stand. Then light the wood and they will appear, and talk to you to ease the discomfort that you will be enduring as the fire rises up to embrace you as they smile with arms open to greet you, and as your ashes fall to the floor you will soon be with your loving mama and papa once again. An't love grand? All together again . I wonder where??...mmmm devil or angel
@bec
i am an openminded person , but this was over my perception of the real and fantastic world. i believe in parallel universes ,but that was too much. i am glad never had such experience againgrin wine
high Blue-Boy, i had a 6ft Latvian blonde hovering over me one time, i always believed in things that go bump nin the night after that, laugh
Blue
what will you do if it happens again??? Will you investigate??
@bec
no , i will ...................ruuuuuuuuuunnlaugh laugh laugh wine yay
LOL that was funny I thought you would have a more logical answer good one Blue rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
@bec i think ghostbusters is what u r looking for laugh laugh wow yay
Blue, if you are not a professional writer of fiction, you should think about it... lots of money in it. People will believe anything if you repeat it long enoughrolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing And if you are not a pro. then my hat ( if I wore a hat ) is off to you. This is very entertaining, thank youlaugh laugh handshake peace
@spring
i am not a pro and the story with the father and his kid , isnt mine ,is from a short sci-fi novel i red ,30-35 years ago ,rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
i write very well in greek ,but my english r not so high leveled to use them as an author.thank u anyway. cheers
@spring
by the way the footsteps story isn't a fiction , it really happened to me 10 years before conversing confused uh oh
It's OLD AGE Playing Tricks on You!!!help
It wasn't a ghost.
It was Santa Claus santa waving
This explains the coal left for you. laugh
@parti
i am sure , u will do those or simiral tricks after ur departure from this futile world. and u will keep laughing with the living.applause head banger rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
@jim
they left me after their death , land and a haunted house lolrolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing cheers
Blue
that was very considerate of them...Did they leave it in the will that they would maintain residence after their death????If they did you just have to learn to live with it.....
i gave the house to my brother and a cousin and got a piece of land next to mine .so let them worry .theyredecorate it and nooe lives there the past 10 years, they changed the roof thou and the boots ,may left the building for good wine comfort sad flower
BLUE applause grin
I believed that...because I had a real experienced when I was a kidthumbs up
@marl
thanks marlene. hope it wasn't that scaring as mine waswave wave bouquet
BLUE,
I tell you its more scary than U experienced.You can ask my mom,she was there too and other sistersuh oh uh oh
@marl
share ur story with us girl.plscomfort conversing head banger
boots? maybe cat with boots dunno grin

sorry to hear that, blue, if this ghost or spirit does exist in the house...maybe he/she just want to say 'hi' to you handshake or you can call and consult psychic to find out what kind of spirit has haunted the house if you're still curious of it wine
@lachica
i prefer to avoid having that experience again. besides the roof and the floor dont exist any more ,cause of the redecoration. bouquet yay comfort
Ok.I will share...
It was a full moon...when suddenly all the lights off(blackout)...my dad was not there at home...(sorry my dad passed away last year.This is true story anyway)my mom...trying to find some candles to put some lights.Then she told us(me and my other sisters) to go with her to find some gas to make a lamp.That time my dad have a little tire shop.So we go there to find something to make a lamp.When suddenly the door closed a big sound BANG!we are trapped...my mom was panic she is a coward than megrin doh
i told her ...mom,dont be paniccomfort ...well i also scared that time but pretend notgrin
We are tried to open the door,pull it..push it.But it wont move.The door key mom had it.And no one outside or behind the door.So,we started crying all of us...And yelling asking some help.The candle light is almost gone.Then mom said to ask it might be a ghost...she said,we need to talk to the ghost to ask to open the door.We heard so noisy outside,sounds that I cant describe.
we are a kids that time...so we followed what moms said to us.We said...please whoever you are...please dont scare us....open the door bowing bowing bowing
believe it or not...after only a few minutes the door was open.Outside was so quite.And the light suddenly on...It was like a dream.But yes it was true and until now...sometimes we talked about was we had experienced.teddybear
@marl
thanks sweetiefor sharing ur ghost experience. but i believe mine was scarier . laugh laugh comfort bouquet
Wish we can use the time travel machine to see which is scary laugh U experience mine and I will experience yours wink thumbs up exchange experiences hug
I sat alone in the living room last night at 10.30pm and while I was reading some notes from my computer I felt like someone or something looking at me from the dinning room. I was alone and didn't really wish there had someone there. Few times I saw the place but nothing. I convinced myself that there was only the light movement on the mirror there. Scare enough, I packed my laptop and went to bedroom immediately.
@summer
r u sure that IT didnt follow u and stayed over ur head as u were sleeping ,stealing ur breath??????wow uh oh roll eyes dunno
I found my right legs bruised in two parts since two days ago. When I was child, they said the bruised comes from a ghost which pinch your skin, but I don't believe it anyway.
@summer
rolling on the floor laughing maybe ur ex .comes and pinches u in ur sleep .use a cam to see whats going on.rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing comfort uh oh
I was raise in a remote area. When I was still a kid, we don't have electricity in our barrio. We use kerosene fuel for lighting. It was a rainy day(heavy). Still early night time (6pm), we runned out of kerosene. My mother told me and my brother next to me to buy kerosene in the barrio's center (our little house was and still is now located at the very far part of the barrio). On our way home, we have to cross a small wooden bridge (not cemented that time) and no house near the bridge. The houses in the barrio are too far apart then. When we are nearin gthe bridge there was a light under it. My brother and me thought maybe there is someone under the bridge catching some shrimps or harvesting snails. When we are about to cross the bridge and we look down, all we could see was a casket floating on the water and there were a lot of candles circling it. No words to say, me and my brother just look at each other and did understand. We started running as fast as we could, never looking back any.

Btw, barrio means a very small inhabited area, next to town.
@shay
hi my friend. what exactly did u and ur brother understand?????
what was it???confused dunno sad flower
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