What's wrong with my profile?

Can anyone look at my profile and see if they find anything wrong with it? Don't worry I can take criticism, but I'd prefer if people would be nice about it. Either way, I just wanna find out why I'm not getting any hits on here? I mean I've gotten very few but they're all from people who either live too far away, or just bums. Can anyone give me advice on how to catch a good man's eye? I need serious help.
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are you really only 4 foot 9 ...and a chain smoker ..wave
send out some flowers to guys that you fancy inviting them to chat to you... use the search facility to find them.
Hi Angelface. Welcome to CS. You do have the face of an angel, however...
I have just checked your profile. The smoking and the "never worked and living with your parents" bit is not very attractive, unless you are looking for a rescuer?

You say you are looking for marriage? Do you need some "prince charming" to come on his white horse and sweep you off your feet?

Sorry, but I am just being honest here.wave

As for all the men you don´t want in a man, don´t you think it´s a bit far fetched? You make it sound as if this is all you´ve been attracting in your life?doh

Now, if you were to write some nice qualities about yourself, your hobbies etc. - and I am sure you have! - maybe you would attract more interesting people?dunno

As for the photos, I shouldn´t put the ones with the red teashirt, but would put the one with the denim jacket (top`part) as a primary photo. dunno

Hope this has helped? and good luck with your searchcomfort
What's wrong with my profile? nothing is just a photo cheers laugh
Simply your text is not friendly at all! it scares people away! If you start from a warning no one would get turn on when they see the profile! Good luck and welcome!wine
Sorry, I made a mistake here:
"As for all the men things you don´t want in a man"

I agree with Zeu too. thumbs up
I agree with some of the comments!

Smoking is not a real winner but at least your honest. And the part about not working is not good. Delete that and when you get to know someone better then be open with them.

Like Virgo says, "Get on the blogs with us"!!!!! People will get to know you better then!!
I think u r smart,try to b more on CS soon ur wish would come true
Nothing wrong with your profilr if you are comfortable with Who you are .
Be' realistic though , about expectations. If you have a few negative points about yourself and we all do, keep your expectations realistic.
Focus on attracting someone Who is a good match for you. Be' proactive, make your own advance a if you like someone.
If you feel your weight, might be' holding you back, do something about it. Or your smoking status, or your employment status......be' aware there are not too many men out here wanting a lady Who is unproductive in a relationship.
Being negative is not helpful, its not other people at fault if they hold no desire in them to contact you, it just that they do not see you as suitable for them .
Hi Angelface
Not much wrong that I can see, if anything you may be saying too much.tmi

Cut your narratives by half and try to sound less choosy. But that is just my opinion, I may have it all wrong.dunno
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Wowww Ken! I couldn´t have put it better myself!thumbs up

Do you really think that Angelface is going to read all this and take notice of it?dunno

Since you are so good at it, do you think that you could review my profile too? - seriously. Thanks.wave
Ken wave

DO NOT review mine!! rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing hug
BTW, your question, no I don't. Not even sure it is a real profile.
Wowww Ken, you really impressed me! What´s the last bit K19?

You have nearly changed the whole profile.
What about the pics?
What about the list of questions?

Is there something you like in it?

Thanks for your review which is very appreciated.hug
Ninerva, if I didn't comment on something, or suggest it be changed, then I found it to be just fine as is. Pictures, questions, all that.
I don't believe I changed it as much as streamlined and improved it. More efficiency is good. We spend about 14 seconds on a profile when searching. No sense at all in providing 23 seconds of read. So direct, to the point, and if they like it, they will stay or communicate. :)
K19 = Ken19
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