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I love it. I admire honesty, it goes with integrity. And before I named my daughter I saw it in a name book her name meant "to capitivate." She definitely has the qualities.
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Sounds like you got it bad......
The cure is the same as the disease ya know.
The cure is the same as the disease ya know.
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I had sort of hoped it would have gone farther but 
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I like it. Has feeling, pain and calmness and hope. Keep it up.kat
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I like it - it comes from the heart.
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~ Mesmerizing Ecstasies ~
~~~
I dream of feeling captivated
like women dream of knights
all the genders have desires
of overpowering delights
A woman seeks a man who’ll woo
and sweep her off her feet
A man prefers to turn to goo
in her presences when they meet
Conflicting dreams of ecstasy
each longing for surrender
to be freely hurled
from an encumbered world
that they’d rather not remember
~~~
(Abra 3/1/07)
Composed by Abracadabra, Inspired by the great poet Dietzman
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I dream of feeling captivated
like women dream of knights
all the genders have desires
of overpowering delights
A woman seeks a man who’ll woo
and sweep her off her feet
A man prefers to turn to goo
in her presences when they meet
Conflicting dreams of ecstasy
each longing for surrender
to be freely hurled
from an encumbered world
that they’d rather not remember
~~~
(Abra 3/1/07)
Composed by Abracadabra, Inspired by the great poet Dietzman
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very tactile, and honest.
thanks for sharing this, you!=o)
Is it about a women?
thanks for sharing this, you!=o)
Is it about a women?
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That is absolutely beautiful, Dietz! 
I mean it, really beautiful 
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now I wanna be captivated
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Who has the dunce cap today?
Could you please pass it to Tabby again.
"Is it about a woman?"
Could you please pass it to Tabby again.
"Is it about a woman?"
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sorry! I didn't say it to be mean. I was attempting a conversation, lol.
And, I own the damned dunce cap now, so there'll be no mystery of where it is should anyone but myslef need it.
I saw a woman, a plane, and a car in the poem. PHHHT!
And, I own the damned dunce cap now, so there'll be no mystery of where it is should anyone but myslef need it.
I saw a woman, a plane, and a car in the poem. PHHHT!
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Captivated? By a car ... yeah, I can see that.
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I always knew that you are delusional, but now I have PROOF!
TABBY!!!
TABBY!!!
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I've seen guy like that, lol.
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I've known plenty of them, sad to say.
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Wow...I feel exactly like the poem dietzman!! Very nice!!
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"Her hand brushed mine, and I felt a shiver,"
Cars don't have hands.
You womin are just being surrealistically silly now.
Cars don't have hands.
You womin are just being surrealistically silly now.
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The questions about a woman, yes it is about one.
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HA!
Nooo, not proof! I have seen guys look at those things with absolute LOVVVE...
hehehe. lil crazy...not delusional.LMAO!
ABRA!!!
Nooo, not proof! I have seen guys look at those things with absolute LOVVVE...
hehehe. lil crazy...not delusional.LMAO!
ABRA!!!
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Captivated
From out of nowhere she came,
She turned and gazed upon me,
My wild heart became instantly tame.
I noted an aurora which surrounded her so,
It pulled me to her like a magnet, I could not let go.
Her hand brushed mine, and I felt a shiver,
I knew in an instance, all I would give her.
Curiously I wondered, why this beauty sought me,
A guy down on his luck, how could this be?
And yet here she was, the one of my dreams,
One who has done something no other has, it seems.
For now I have been bound by her love,
I am now . . . captivated.