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Oct 16, 2007 12:06 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Ivory white bones
In the desert,
All alone,
Bleached by time,
And neglect.
Sandstorms scour,
The world rejects
The end comes
Quicker than
Anyone expects.

Again, maybe,
For the price of love,
The bones will move,
And rise above,
The hold of soil,
Clinging, dragging,
Heart of dust,
Blood is rust,
Beating still,
But flagging.

Eyes caked,
Throat is choked,
Will to speak
Has been revoked.
Blinded, mute,
Dear Death refute,
Before times overtake
My bones at stake,
A claim it makes
And sternly reminds,
‘Tis signs, they are,
Of coming times.

Dead carcass dreaming
More to this seeming
Than what is seen.
Nobody knows the
Places I have been,
The tides pushed back
To the never-when.
The mountains moved
To be here and now,
To be, hear and know,
The portals all aglow,
And see the beauty in
The falling snow.
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Oct 16, 2007 12:08 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
nuala
nualanualadublin, Dublin Ireland12 Threads 6,456 Posts
wow thats so powerful Galactic yet again you are amazinghug hug kiss
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Oct 16, 2007 12:13 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Very powerful images there, my friend.thumbs up applause hug
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Oct 16, 2007 12:20 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
Im left a bit speechless but I know I like this comfort handshake hug
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Oct 16, 2007 12:27 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Well, I'm getting a bit run-down and discouraged these days.

I'm not a big fan of hope, anyway, but lately its just seemed like a poison to me. Enough of a shock to keep my heart beating, but not much more benefit from it than that...

frustrated moping mumbling
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Oct 16, 2007 12:35 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
trish123
trish123trish123Macclesfield, Cheshire, England UK177 Threads 4 Polls 13,724 Posts
This too shall pass my friend - just around the next corner...........sunshine hug
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Oct 16, 2007 12:40 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
this i understand


thanks for your prose



as always
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Oct 16, 2007 12:41 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
Zellarrone1
Zellarrone1Zellarrone1Hull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UK33 Threads 4 Polls 7,644 Posts
I thought this thread was about cleaning when I saw the title so I came in to see if I could pick up some tips laugh

it's very good though thumbs up
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Oct 16, 2007 12:44 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Its about cleaning metaphorical house, tracey. tongue
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Oct 16, 2007 12:50 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
Zellarrone1
Zellarrone1Zellarrone1Hull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UK33 Threads 4 Polls 7,644 Posts
At least I made you laugh I hope laugh My bathroom could do with a good bleaching and scouring it even has a few cobwebs in it. Never mind laugh
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Oct 16, 2007 10:36 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
I'd be happy to help, but I just did the cost/benefit analysis on plane-fare vs. just hiring a local maid...

I say, hire a local maid...rolling on the floor laughing tongue
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Oct 16, 2007 10:59 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
shipoker55
shipoker55shipoker55St. Petersburg, Florida USA211 Threads 2 Polls 9,362 Posts
frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated frustrated POEMS POEMS POEMS!!!!!









jUST kIDDING!tongue tongue
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Oct 16, 2007 11:01 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Hey, its better than Would you ____ the person above you...rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing tongue
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Oct 16, 2007 11:17 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
I greatly admire the person above me for his skill with words tip hat
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Oct 16, 2007 11:39 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
eyewoodbegood
eyewoodbegoodeyewoodbegoodRichfield, Utah USA10 Threads 136 Posts
Watch out Bob Dylan, you have met your match.handshake
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Oct 16, 2007 11:42 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
HzChld
HzChldHzChldSomewhere in the middle, Oklahoma USA55 Threads 2,779 Posts
comfort hug
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Oct 16, 2007 11:42 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
HzChld
HzChldHzChldSomewhere in the middle, Oklahoma USA55 Threads 2,779 Posts
rolling on the floor laughing
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Oct 16, 2007 11:43 PM CST Bleached and Scoured
HzChld
HzChldHzChldSomewhere in the middle, Oklahoma USA55 Threads 2,779 Posts
wow...
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