Speechless moment (34)
The heart your muse...your pen beckons...
flowers for one without thorns....
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I agree with Jeff, Dorielle. The whole poem is beautiful, but I especially love the last 4 lines...
between two heartbeats is forever
the place where love is made,
sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn.
between two heartbeats is forever
the place where love is made,
sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn.
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Speechless indeed. But, thankfully, moments are only that.
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StressFree: Perception is everything, sorry if I did not give you what you needed to know....maybe I am just too wrapped up in something?
No need to apologise.
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Good morning Zarah, Dana, Don!
The sun is just coming up here and I am going for a walk under the new day.
The sun is just coming up here and I am going for a walk under the new day.
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bajanblue: No need to apologise.
between two heartbeats is forever
the place where love is made,
sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn.
So you were talking about your own heartbeats? If so, then it puts things in the clear for me. Like I said, perception is everything.
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bajanblue: Good morning Zarah, Dana, Don!
The sun is just coming up here and I am going for a walk under the new day.
The sun is just coming up here and I am going for a walk under the new day.
Wonderful!! Enjoy it, Dorielle! And have a great day!
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A song comes to mind Just Breathe
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StressFree: between two heartbeats is forever
the place where love is made,
sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn.
So you were talking about your own heartbeats? If so, then it puts things in the clear for me. Like I said, perception is everything.
the place where love is made,
sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn.
So you were talking about your own heartbeats? If so, then it puts things in the clear for me. Like I said, perception is everything.
that do not know the pause
between two heartbeats is forever
The final three lines are resolution, the heartbeats irrelevant to the main theme for me.
I place more importance on attention than passive perception much as I enjoy Descartes.
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cutypie: A song comes to mind Just Breathe
Good song! Good advice! Thank you.
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bajanblue: Good morning Zarah, Dana, Don!
The sun is just coming up here and I am going for a walk under the new day.
The sun is just coming up here and I am going for a walk under the new day.
'Morning Dorielle!
It's raining here, so no walks on this day. But I will drink a cup of coffee and try to find rythm in the raindrops on the roof.
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bajanblue: Interesting if that is what you got out of it.
It is actually about the writer's block I have been struggling with.
It is actually about the writer's block I have been struggling with.
Well you certainly didn't seem to be blocked writing that! Beautiful imagery and lovely words... as always!
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been there done that.... just not as elegantly
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This comment suggests both of your posts are more verbal flags indicating your presence than critical commentary.
Perception is everything, sorry if I did not give you what you needed to know....maybe I am just too wrapped up in something?