Speechless moment (34)
Beautiful as always
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You are a gifted woman.
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DizzyDi and Dadof Ducks, thanks for enjoying it.
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bajanblue: DizzyDi and Dadof Ducks, thanks for enjoying it.
No thank you for your special words
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sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn
Very good Bajan
for the smile to mark the coming dawn
Very good Bajan
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bren1: sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn
Very good Bajan
for the smile to mark the coming dawn
Very good Bajan
It's always fun to know which images catch people. Thanks------ This thread is Archived ------
"pulling colours from the sea, the sky
from the me myself and I
that ache to weave fine silk
from half-born, limping concepts
that wilt, unsaid in darkened hallways"
This is my favourite part. It speaks to me of our depths and the frustration of trying to explain the unexplainable.
You say things so beautifully and so profoundly though, so you must have found your way through the labyrinth to be able to give it voice in poems like this.
from the me myself and I
that ache to weave fine silk
from half-born, limping concepts
that wilt, unsaid in darkened hallways"
This is my favourite part. It speaks to me of our depths and the frustration of trying to explain the unexplainable.
You say things so beautifully and so profoundly though, so you must have found your way through the labyrinth to be able to give it voice in poems like this.
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bajanblue: Words come up
and stumble
on the threshold of my lips
they dance, impatient,
tapping on my teeth
with pretty fluted serif edges
pulling colours from the sea, the sky
from the me myself and I
that ache to weave fine silk
from half-born, limping concepts
that wilt, unsaid in darkened hallways
cluttered up with thought
with visions of some future
drawn by strange impatient hands
that do not know the pause
between two heartbeats is forever
the place where love is made,
sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn.
and stumble
on the threshold of my lips
they dance, impatient,
tapping on my teeth
with pretty fluted serif edges
pulling colours from the sea, the sky
from the me myself and I
that ache to weave fine silk
from half-born, limping concepts
that wilt, unsaid in darkened hallways
cluttered up with thought
with visions of some future
drawn by strange impatient hands
that do not know the pause
between two heartbeats is forever
the place where love is made,
sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn.
Im speechless - and in that place where love is made, truly
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Beautiful BB.
Everything you write is always so touching.
Everything you write is always so touching.
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A feel good poem in the now saturated with new love passion with only the blissful future to look forward to......
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Really liked that last four lines, D.------ This thread is Archived ------
StressFree: A feel good poem in the now saturated with new love passion with only the blissful future to look forward to......
Interesting if that is what you got out of it.
It is actually about the writer's block I have been struggling with.
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joanie04984: Just say it...time is short
time is always just this moment!
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trish123: Im speechless - and in that place where love is made, truly
it is just a moment
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--- VG - Bajan 
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bajanblue: Interesting if that is what you got out of it.
It is actually about the writer's block I have been struggling with.
It is actually about the writer's block I have been struggling with.
Oh...I thought it was about a couple freshly in love coming togehter as they are for that first kiss....
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StressFree: Oh...I thought it was about a couple freshly in love coming togehter as they are for that first kiss....
After your first post I took another look at what I had written, because others frequently see layers of information that I am too close to to interpret immediately and it was interesting that your reaction was so far removed from my perceptions and intent.
This comment suggests both of your posts are more verbal flags indicating your presence than critical commentary.
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and stumble
on the threshold of my lips
they dance, impatient,
tapping on my teeth
with pretty fluted serif edges
pulling colours from the sea, the sky
from the me myself and I
that ache to weave fine silk
from half-born, limping concepts
that wilt, unsaid in darkened hallways
cluttered up with thought
with visions of some future
drawn by strange impatient hands
that do not know the pause
between two heartbeats is forever
the place where love is made,
sins are forgiven, breath taken
for the smile to mark the coming dawn.