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Sep 1, 2008 10:34 PM CST Where Have You Gone?
BarrenPneuma
BarrenPneumaBarrenPneumaGolden Staircase, Ontario Canada87 Threads 3 Polls 1,561 Posts
Eyes so bright, they mute the lightning on a summer night
A smile so promising, it lifts abandon from the heart
Drew me unerringly forth, like a wayward moth to a light
After all I’ve been through, I dreamt of a new start.

A friendship that would certainly last throughout the years
A companion desired in body, mind, and soul
Where there was never any doubt or shame in tears
Each and every moment spent restoring us to whole.

Laughter and joy, personal pains and shared sorrow
Healing words and prayers to put away the past
Endless dreams and talks of an endless tomorrow
Your spirit burned into mine, surely it could last.

Released from all that held you down in your life
You closed your heart and walked away
My mission was never to take you to wife
But put you on your feet for another day.

Yet still within my heart, I bear you no ill will
My Love for you has grown beyond any simple need
If never I see your perfect face, I will always Love you still
My garden has been weeded and yet remains a seed.

The hardest part of all of this for me
Is that I lost my Love and my very best friend
You turned your back so suddenly
I never saw the end.

My heart now empty, I gave it all, I now just blindly live
Even through this all, I know that if ever you came again
There are no bounds within my soul that would not give
Not any price, no amends, no reasons to explain.

But now faith, hope, and love remain -- these three
The greatest of these is love.
Even if not one voice might agree
I know you were sent from above.
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Sep 1, 2008 10:38 PM CST Where Have You Gone?
Hugz_n_Kissez
Hugz_n_KissezHugz_n_KissezSomeplace, Ontario Canada59 Threads 2 Polls 25,438 Posts
BarrenPneuma: Eyes so bright, they mute the lightning on a summer night
A smile so promising, it lifts abandon from the heart
Drew me unerringly forth, like a wayward moth to a light
After all I’ve been through, I dreamt of a new start.

A friendship that would certainly last throughout the years
A companion desired in body, mind, and soul
Where there was never any doubt or shame in tears
Each and every moment spent restoring us to whole.

Laughter and joy, personal pains and shared sorrow
Healing words and prayers to put away the past
Endless dreams and talks of an endless tomorrow
Your spirit burned into mine, surely it could last.

Released from all that held you down in your life
You closed your heart and walked away
My mission was never to take you to wife
But put you on your feet for another day.

Yet still within my heart, I bear you no ill will
My Love for you has grown beyond any simple need
If never I see your perfect face, I will always Love you still
My garden has been weeded and yet remains a seed.

The hardest part of all of this for me
Is that I lost my Love and my very best friend
You turned your back so suddenly
I never saw the end.

My heart now empty, I gave it all, I now just blindly live
Even through this all, I know that if ever you came again
There are no bounds within my soul that would not give
Not any price, no amends, no reasons to explain.

But now faith, hope, and love remain -- these three
The greatest of these is love.
Even if not one voice might agree
I know you were sent from above.



OMG!!!!!! That is simply beautiful.....hug teddybear hug bouquet
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Sep 1, 2008 10:40 PM CST Where Have You Gone?
mbcasey
mbcaseymbcaseyNorth Myrtle Beach, South Carolina USA68 Threads 7 Polls 16,449 Posts
great poemhandshake
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Sep 1, 2008 10:41 PM CST Where Have You Gone?
mylifewithu
mylifewithumylifewithuSpringfield, Missouri USA174 Threads 23,670 Posts
Wow, very impressive, I love this!! Thankyou for sharing itwine sad flower hug
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Sep 1, 2008 10:43 PM CST Where Have You Gone?
Cary0608
Cary0608Cary0608Mandaluyong City, Metro Manila Philippines3 Threads 340 Posts
thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up

simply beautiful.wave
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Sep 1, 2008 10:46 PM CST Where Have You Gone?
BarrenPneuma
BarrenPneumaBarrenPneumaGolden Staircase, Ontario Canada87 Threads 3 Polls 1,561 Posts
The best works of a writer come when they are starving, physically, emotionally or spiritually. It takes utter abandon to see the beauty before our eyes at times.

Thank you for the kind words.

Sadly it takes a broken heart to recognize one, and no one deserves to have that hurt.
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Sep 1, 2008 10:46 PM CST Where Have You Gone?
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
Very nice, lots of feeling.heart wings
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Sep 2, 2008 4:01 AM CST Where Have You Gone?
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
Well.

It is lovely and even this hard old Ice Princess heart melts at that.
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Sep 2, 2008 4:04 AM CST Where Have You Gone?
Cary0608
Cary0608Cary0608Mandaluyong City, Metro Manila Philippines3 Threads 340 Posts
BarrenPneuma: The best works of a writer come when they are starving, physically, emotionally or spiritually. It takes utter abandon to see the beauty before our eyes at times.

Thank you for the kind words.

Sadly it takes a broken heart to recognize one, and no one deserves to have that hurt.


thumbs up hug comfort
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