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Sep 2, 2008 8:30 AM CST my heart broken
Trueblue4u
Trueblue4uTrueblue4uNorth East Vic, Victoria Australia14 Threads 1 Polls 41 Posts
Silent tears flow down my cheeks,
Leaving stains as I do weep.
"It'll be alright," you said.
"Just give me another chance," you pleaded.

I listened to all your false hopes.
I believed in your soothing words.
I smiled my fake smile,
And pretended to be all right.

Deep down I know,
It'll never be the same,
I can't go back.
Why did you cause me this pain?

You cut through my built up walls,
Brought me into a new light.
Showed me hope and love again,
But then I saw you with her that night.

My eyes sting from crying.
My throats hoarse from weeping.
My heart aches from the torture.
My body's crippled and tired.

There's no more hope,
I know the truth.
So stop your lies,
And let me go.
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Sep 2, 2008 8:42 AM CST my heart broken
Very nice to see a man write emotional poetry.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:01 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
nomindgames: Very nice to see a man write emotional poetry.


It was written by a lady name of Angie K






devil
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Sep 2, 2008 9:10 AM CST my heart broken
Trueblue4u
Trueblue4uTrueblue4uNorth East Vic, Victoria Australia14 Threads 1 Polls 41 Posts
SirenLydia: It was written by a lady name of Angie K



Yes indeed it was ...i didnt say it was done by me if you take a look at my other ones you will see i have only done one my self (LIFE SUX)
i could not wright a poem to save my life
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Sep 2, 2008 9:11 AM CST my heart broken
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
Trueblue4u: Yes indeed it was ...i didnt say it was done by me if you take a look at my other ones you will see i have only done one my self (LIFE SUX)
i could not wright a poem to save my life



You are hurting aren't you?
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Sep 2, 2008 9:13 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
Trueblue4u: Yes indeed it was ...i didnt say it was done by me if you take a look at my other ones you will see i have only done one my self (LIFE SUX)
i could not wright a poem to save my life


It's assumed you did if not credited to the writer.



peace devil
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Sep 2, 2008 9:16 AM CST my heart broken
Trueblue4u
Trueblue4uTrueblue4uNorth East Vic, Victoria Australia14 Threads 1 Polls 41 Posts
is there any more nits you like to pic ...i make one mistake and you are ready to hang me...last time i will post in Int'l Forums doh
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Sep 2, 2008 9:19 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
Trueblue4u: is there any more nits you like to pic ...i make one mistake and you are ready to hang me...last time i will post in Int'l Forums


confused
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Sep 2, 2008 9:20 AM CST my heart broken
Trueblue4u: is there any more nits you like to pic ...i make one mistake and you are ready to hang me...last time i will post in Int'l Forums




Please ingore the negative feedback. Please don't quit posting here cause you did nothing wrong.

You posted this poem to express your pain that you're most likely feeling right now.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:21 AM CST my heart broken
venere08
venere08venere08Puglia and Autumn, South Australia Australia121 Threads 2 Polls 9,996 Posts
Trueblue4u: is there any more nits you like to pic ...i make one mistake and you are ready to hang me...last time i will post in Int'l Forums


Don't be such a wimp! You're an Aussie. Oi, OI, oi!!! Remember?

laugh:
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Sep 2, 2008 9:23 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
somechick: Please ingore the negative feedback. Please don't quit posting here cause you did nothing wrong.

You posted this poem to express your pain that you're most likely feeling right now.


How can my pointing out the poem's author be negative feedback?
I never said I wanted to hang him he did..............dunno devil
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Sep 2, 2008 9:24 AM CST my heart broken
I feel that peole need to show alittle bit more compassion when someone posts something.

Who among us have ever done something by accident? I've posted a poem myself and accidently forgot to include the the authors name.

Noones perfect , I know I'm not.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:26 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia: How can my pointing out the poem's author be negative feedback?
I never said I wanted to hang him he did..............



Why was that so important for you to do that to him.

That's mans in pain.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:26 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
somechick: I feel that peole need to show alittle bit more compassion when someone posts something.

Who among us have ever done something by accident? I've posted a poem myself and accidently forgot to include the the authors name.

Noones perfect , I know I'm not.


Why then did he and now you make such a fuss about it???




devil
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Sep 2, 2008 9:28 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia
SirenLydiaSirenLydiaBury St Edmunds, Suffolk, England UK45 Threads 2 Polls 4,138 Posts
somechick: Why was that so important for you to do that to him.

That's mans in pain.


Do not try to make out the I have done anything wrong.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:29 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia: Why then did he and now you make such a fuss about it???



I could ask you the very same question. You never did answer my question.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:30 AM CST my heart broken
SirenLydia: Do not try to make out the I have done anything wrong.



I don't have to make out anything it's right there for everyone to read.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:30 AM CST my heart broken
Fallingman
FallingmanFallingmanDublin, Ireland29 Threads 12 Polls 11,436 Posts
SirenLydia: Do not try to make out the I have done anything wrong.


You did nothing wrong. He should have mentioned the author.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:30 AM CST my heart broken
Sommerauer71
Sommerauer71Sommerauer71Salzburg, Austria133 Threads 4 Polls 12,414 Posts
somechick: I feel that peole need to show alittle bit more compassion when someone posts something.

Who among us have ever done something by accident? I've posted a poem myself and accidently forgot to include the the authors name.

Noones perfect , I know I'm not.


Good point.
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Sep 2, 2008 9:31 AM CST my heart broken
Trueblue4u
Trueblue4uTrueblue4uNorth East Vic, Victoria Australia14 Threads 1 Polls 41 Posts
Ok I made a mistake I do give credit to people who wrote the poems... but this time I missed out lets all call it even and enjoy the poem for what its about...its about the pain that everyone suffers from time to time and its very well written...and it hit home to everyone that has been hurt in that way ...I am sorry I didn’t copy the name of who wrote it but I will make sue next time
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