...thoughts... (86)
Xtabentun: Longing for a thought
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
Beautiful...
(a mite wordy tho I have been practicing simplicity and here you are leading me astray... by the hand... my butt... pretty little liar...
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Xtabentun: Longing for a thought
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
That is pretty deep for this time of night, but then it can send my thoughts down a narrow path
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BarrenPneuma: Beautiful...
(a mite wordy tho I have been practicing simplicity and here you are leading me astray... by the hand... my butt... pretty little liar... )
(a mite wordy tho I have been practicing simplicity and here you are leading me astray... by the hand... my butt... pretty little liar... )
I feel ancient! I haven't wrote any poetry since highschool..and i found a note in one of my notebooks now and decided to work it a bit ...
Neh, far from being a poet..but it felt good the exercise!
plus, leading you astray is fun 
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Tech49: That is pretty deep for this time of night, but then it can send my thoughts down a narrow path
On a well lit narrow path I hope...it's a blind night out! ------ This thread is Archived ------
Xtabentun: Longing for a thought
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
Very nice Xbentun.
*Notice the absence of innuendo...I think you've broken me.*
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Ocee35: Very nice Xbentun.*Notice the absence of innuendo...I think you've broken me.*
Hahaha My dear Watson, it is merely a matter of persistance! ------ This thread is Archived ------
roses are red'
violets are
wait......
wrong thread
violets are
wait......
wrong thread
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airliner: roses are red'
violets are wait......wrong thread
violets are wait......wrong thread
..blue,
airliner is here,
and he's running from you
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Xtabentun: ..blue,
airliner is here,
and he's running from you
airliner is here,
and he's running from you
muuuaaahhh
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airliner: muuuaaahhh
Not in this thread Hank ( people might see us)------ This thread is Archived ------
Xtabentun: Not in this thread Hank ( people might see us )
gosh...wat is to see ?These days I have deliberately lack of taste and therefore do not judge much...
Hey I like it
...your poetry I mean...
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bushbun: gosh...wat is to see ?
These days I have deliberately lack of taste and therefore do not judge much...
Hey I like it ...your poetry I mean...
These days I have deliberately lack of taste and therefore do not judge much...
Hey I like it ...your poetry I mean...
Gee, thank you!
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Xtabentun: Gee, thank you!
<---what's this ?------ This thread is Archived ------
Xtabentun: Longing for a thought
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
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bushbun: <---what's this ?
You admit you luck the taste ...but you like my poem! ------ This thread is Archived ------
Xtabentun: You admit you luck the taste ...but you like my poem!
Yes, I admit to have a lack of taste
...these days only ...This comment, however, wasn't intented toward your poem, but rather to your comment as you stated " Not in this thread Hank ( people might see us) "....
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bushbun: Yes, I admit to have a lack of taste ...these days only ...
This comment, however, wasn't intented toward your poem, but rather to your comment as you stated " Not in this thread Hank ( people might see us) "....
This comment, however, wasn't intented toward your poem, but rather to your comment as you stated " Not in this thread Hank ( people might see us) "....
hey
...relax! I was teasing you 
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Xtabentun: hey ...relax! I was teasing you
Can you tease...do you know how to tease Xtabentun
?Please tease me...I love when women try to tease
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Xtabentun: Longing for a thought
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...
A beautiful poem that suits a beautiful Lady.. thank you for sharing..
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suspended in the brackets of a feeling
it’s real, I can almost see it
feel the pale vibration caressing my face
as I breathe in .
It’s a thought....smaller than me
should be within my power
to bring it closer and hold it.
To steal it and lock it
in my temporary world of feelings.
But is not...reality is stronger than me and thoughts have masters.
I’d never thought I’d long for the master of a thought
just to own a feeling again.
It’s crispy fresh the vibration, and it’s caressing my face
....the thought that brings the feeling ...