Thoughts deep within Deny this change My walls imprison me Steamy tears fall Entangled memories seize my mind Emptiness comes with ease Oblivious echoes of your kiss Grace my nights Eternal desire Intertwined with truth Inspires careless dreams Sudden pain awakens reality Spoken words Roughly flowing Enriches my faith That you will return Weary nights end Selfless love returns Wasting no time Eternity begins
S.B.E. this is a wonderful poem of longing and denial. "Wasting no time Eternity begins"...a GREAT line, the double entrée is wonderful and poingant. Good write! ;-)
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKSep 17, 2010
I'm with the old man above, GREAT write,
CJ
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USASep 17, 2010
Enigmatic and intriguing! Kudos!
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKSep 17, 2010
Agree with GG, CJ and Free Wonderful write SadBlueEyes..and thankyou for sharing..
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"Wasting no time
Eternity begins"...a GREAT line, the double entrée is wonderful and poingant. Good write! ;-)
CJ
Wonderful write SadBlueEyes..and thankyou for sharing..
Ljj