Standing on the seashore..alone..watching ..waiting..for you..A crimson sun slips into the deep..All that remains is a violet haze..My soul wants to fly away into the eternal night..yet I wait..and watch..for you..I am no more..my strength is gone..I am but a shadow..a shadow of dreams..Once I could walk..but now I sink..and kneel..I've lain down my sword..and my head sags..and my eyes close as one lost to the land of the living..Moments pass..then..time has no meaning..Has all hope perished? A fingertip glides accross my cheek..I did not know you were there..then more..a hand cups my face..and turning my head upwards..I see you..your eyes locked into mine like a scarlet fire..Never blinking..almost smiling.. you pull my soul from the abyss..Slowly kneeling..your fragrance sweeps through my senses like a heavenly wind.I am healed by your embrace..your breasts are like warm doves against my bear chest..I am free..I live..Our bodies fall in slow motion to the sand..With you..I can only live..Without you..I can only die..You are power..You are Woman..
cafetwo2010, a very romantic notion and poem. Yes many of us feel the same, thanks for writing it.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 4, 2010
Thanks goodguy. Nice to meet you my friend. Women are so awesome that us guys have never quite been able to express it. That's what's so cool about it.lol cafe
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 4, 2010
woohhooo yes jim,very romantic indeed,wow, i love it and here's for you
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 5, 2010
Thanks jeddah..I don't often take my sword to the beach..lol.cafe
Hi, cafetwo2010, We give power to those we love, in trust...power to pull my soul from the abyss. wait..and watch.. and swim for your life 'til bodies fall in slow motion to the sand! Lovely tribute to Woman.
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We give power to those we love, in trust...power to pull my soul from the abyss. wait..and watch.. and swim for your life 'til bodies fall in slow motion to the sand! Lovely tribute to Woman.
Truly,
Ginger
this is such a stunning poem
and this is even more.
Thank you for this 'even more'
of the list.
Cafe.. !