Power of Woman

Standing on the seashore..alone..watching ..waiting..for you..A crimson sun slips into the deep..All that remains is a violet haze..My soul wants to fly away into the eternal night..yet I wait..and watch..for you..I am no more..my strength is gone..I am but a shadow..a shadow of dreams..Once I could walk..but now I sink..and kneel..I've lain down my sword..and my head sags..and my eyes close as one lost to the land of the living..Moments pass..then..time has no meaning..Has all hope perished? A fingertip glides accross my cheek..I did not know you were there..then more..a hand cups my face..and turning my head upwards..I see you..your eyes locked into mine like a scarlet fire..Never blinking..almost smiling.. you pull my soul from the abyss..Slowly kneeling..your fragrance sweeps through my senses like a heavenly wind.I am healed by your embrace..your breasts are like warm doves against my bear chest..I am free..I live..Our bodies fall in slow motion to the sand..With you..I can only live..Without you..I can only die..You are power..You are Woman..
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Posted: Oct 2010

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agoodguy2have
cafetwo2010, a very romantic notion and poem. Yes many of us feel the same, thanks for writing it.
cafetwo2010
Thanks goodguy. Nice to meet you my friend. Women are so awesome that us guys have never quite been able to express it. That's what's so cool about it.lol cafe cheers
jeddah12
applause woohhoooapplause yes jim,very romantic indeed,wow,thumbs up i love it and here's for youcheers wine
cafetwo2010
Thanks jeddah..I don't often take my sword to the beach..lol.cafe
gnj4u
Hi, cafetwo2010,
We give power to those we love, in trust...power to pull my soul from the abyss. wait..and watch.. and swim for your life 'til bodies fall in slow motion to the sand! Lovely tribute to Woman.
Ladybee42
there's a lot of feeling in this, thanks for sharing
thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet bouquet
hariksna
Woman an essential element....without them neither you nor I exist...a nice dedication to that class,,,Thanks
ginger1959
Wow so much catching up to do...this is so sensual, No. 1 class act. I feel it !!!!

Truly,

Gingerangel
ladyjewel
hug I am so happy I was born a womanteddybear
this is such a stunning poemhug
Pipin
This portraits very deep feeling within your souls desire, thank you very much for sharing teddybear hug
beautifulyou
So many of yours are beautiful (((Jim,)))
and this is even more.

Thank you for this 'even more' kiss
darkhorse555
in the crimson sun with a violet haze you penned really beautiful you submitted a lovely piece thumbs up grin
cafetwo2010
Ty ladyjewel.. Billions are happy you were born a woman, and of course I count myself at the head
of the list.wine
cafetwo2010
Ty pipin.. You are a true romantic dear. Thanks a zillion.kiss
cafetwo2010
Ty beautifulyou.. Thank you even more for your even more.
Cafe.. !wine
cafetwo2010
TTy darkhorse.. Thanks kindly bro. Wrote this a long time ago.
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