Finely crafted words, you do have the poet's touch!
niah9Auckland, New ZealandOct 9, 2010
I have this feeling I should be cleaning when I read this poem. I can see the stains...I hope they aren't all real.... Whatever, it's a great poem. Niah9
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 9, 2010
Dunno if you know Free, but Staines here, is a rather posh suburb of London.....says it all really.....lol......well written....Andrew....
freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAOct 9, 2010
Thanks goodguy! Was just thinking of what to write about when I saw the ink stain on my jeans, which had already been stained with paint, so...
freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAOct 9, 2010
Thank you so much Quietstorm!
RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 10, 2010
This was certainly no stain on your writing just great
911gypsywestbank, British Columbia CanadaOct 10, 2010
I just "shout it out"
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusOct 10, 2010
"Stains that tell a story, Of life lived day by day, Until the final staining As life's blood drains away."
an amazing perspective, loved it, thanks for sharing...
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I can relate for sure, love the truth!!!!
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Whatever, it's a great poem. Niah9
Of life lived day by day,
Until the final staining
As life's blood drains away."
an amazing perspective, loved it, thanks for sharing...
Thanks Andrew! Didn't know that, but anyplace called Staines needs regular cleaning to be really posh. Probably have servants for that...
Thanks Redex! I cleaned it up a bit for mixed company.
Thanks gypsy! Nice hearing from you!
Thanks Earl! All stains are grey in the dark.
Thanks cafe! Glad it brought a smile...
Thanks to all for your kind words!