Across the ocean~ Fire and devotion~ Your love has captured me~ Ships are sailing~ Pray be no failing~ On this stormy sea~ So long I've waited~ Anticipated~ Now I see the land! Soon we'll go walking ~ So sweetly talking~ Laughter and hand in hand~ And when night has fallin'~ And I come callin'~ You'll be forever mine~ So take this message~ Wait at the passage~ Remember our secret sign!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKOct 10, 2010
A happy, optimistic write, Cafe. Thanks, CJ
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 10, 2010
thank you carol..Waiting for my ship to come in..lol. cafe
serpico12cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 10, 2010
great write again..put together so well..hope you get the person you look for..
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 10, 2010
remember our secret sign...made me grin, cafe...great bunch of words you strung together here, sir!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 10, 2010
serpico..Thank you Sir. I think I'll start letting her look for me.lol. I'm a bit tired.. This poem seemed to fall together like some sort of gigsaw puzzle. cafe
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 10, 2010
Thanks Gashly..Keep grining baby.lol.cafe
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 11, 2010
nice poem jim,keep that humor going love it:
ginger1959Kingston, Ontario CanadaOct 11, 2010
I wish I knew the"secret sign" BEAUTIFUL!!!
Truly,
Ginger
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 12, 2010
Aww.. really nice! And great writing...
RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 13, 2010
Lovely words waiting. You have painted full picture
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 26, 2014
Cafe Jim,
I've been in your poem box (just started, really - and promise I will only bring out a few at a time. When I posted on your challenge, that was basically my 'answer' to it - but your kind & gracious reply back - got me to thinking, I might try what I mentioned... not sure when... you know me, here a while, gone quite awhile - but in the meantime, will enjoy the search)
There's some I've forgotten... and some I've never even seen - so it's gonna be fun!
Keep on writing - you are most definitely a talented poet, along with many others in this corner that I hope some day to read much more of.
Thanks a billion! Cat
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 26, 2014
...and still love this poem!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 29, 2014
Cat.. You are a mystery fan of my poems to be sure. But who you are is the greatest mystery of all. I have Scotland Yard working overtime, and sooner or later we will flush you out.. that is if your in the flushable mood.lol
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CJ
BEAUTIFUL!!!
Truly,
Ginger
I've been in your poem box (just started, really - and promise I will only bring out a few at a time. When I posted on your challenge, that was basically my 'answer' to it - but your kind & gracious reply back - got me to thinking, I might try what I mentioned... not sure when... you know me, here a while, gone quite awhile - but in the meantime, will enjoy the search)
There's some I've forgotten... and some I've never even seen - so it's gonna be fun!
Keep on writing - you are most definitely a talented poet, along with many others in this corner that I hope some day to read much more of.
Thanks a billion! Cat
be sure. But who you are is the greatest
mystery of all. I have Scotland Yard working
overtime, and sooner or later we will flush you
out.. that is if your in the flushable mood.lol