Feeling Our Way

by Unknown

Oct 2010 1,157 Views 20 comments

Feeling Our Way

Author: Unknown

At first communications,
May be a little rough.
Silly misunderstandings,
And other mundane stuff.

But we keep working at it,
And things just might work out.
I'll do my part, I promise,
Of that please have no doubt.

When time passes with no word,
We tend to worry so.
But then we find the reason,
It helps so much to know.

So please don't give up ever,
And neither so will I.
Each storm we two shall weather,
As long as we both try.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Oct 2010

About this poem:

Thinking of someone special...

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Comments (20)

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 12, 2010

Liked this one fal as it is the way of things

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 12, 2010

So please don't give up ever,
And neither so will I.
Each storm we two shall weather,
As long as we both try

THIS IS SUCH A WONDERFUL WORD TO ENCOURAGE SOMEONE ONT TIMES OF UPS AND DOWNS OF THEIR RELATIONSHIPS.

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaOct 12, 2010

Good sentiment. I can relate to that.
thanks, freeatlast

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 12, 2010

FAL, you captured it. and i concur with jed on the last stanza. fine piece of prose, kudos.

ginger1959Kingston, Ontario CanadaOct 12, 2010

So true your beautiful words.
If this person feels the same, she will not give up!!!
Hope she is thinking of you too!!!

Very sincere poem..

Ginger

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 12, 2010

Nice one free..

To you and your someone special!

freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAOct 12, 2010

Thanks Redex! Yes, the way of things...

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainOct 12, 2010

nice FAL, I believe LDR's are much harder than real time to come to fruition, but I hope when they do they are very fulfilling!
rob

niah9Auckland, New ZealandOct 12, 2010

Not quite how I read some of your previous poems Free, but I like it and understand.

niah9

gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandOct 12, 2010

two way traffic, always helps, captured nicely here freeatlast, nice poem.

freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAOct 13, 2010

Thanks jeddah! Yeah every relationship has its ups and downs...

lavinaParadise, IndonesiaOct 13, 2010

Its so true ..... nothing come easy way.
Thanks for sharing it & keep always try

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 13, 2010

Beautiful word craft 'free'. It's a nice tribute to a right and positive attitude in a relationship.. cafe

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAOct 13, 2010

as usual F.A.L. a nice set of quatrains...i also like the double play of the title depending on where you accent it...nice ;-)

freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAOct 14, 2010

Thanks Macduff, glad you could relate...

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKOct 15, 2010

Nice rhyme. Slow is the way to go.

CJ

freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAOct 15, 2010

Thanks Gashly! Yeah, the last stanza is the resolution of conflict, the "happy ending"...

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandOct 15, 2010

If misunderstandings are cleared at once instead of letting it eat like a canker that slowly decays a relationship it helps for a healthy one.Working at it helps to overcome stormy weather.Nice way of,"Feeling our way" Thank you Free.

freeatlast64847OPLanagan, Missouri USAOct 15, 2010

Thanks Ginger! I hopw she is too!

Thanks beautiful, for your always kind comments and for the toast!

Thanks rob! Yeah LDRs pose particular difficulties, but love will prevail.

Thanks niah for your kind comfort.

Thanks got it all! Nice analogy, "two way traffic."

Thanks lavina! Yep, gotta keep on keepin' on...

Thanks cafe! Yeah, ya gotta stay positive or what's the point?

Thanks goodguy! Never even caught that myself.

Thanks CJ! Yep, tortoise philosophy.

Thanks paloma! Yes communication is key, misunderstandings are stumbling blocks.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAOct 16, 2010

Hi, freeatlast64847,
But then we find the reason, It helps so much to know. When trusting in the good intentions of the other person does not come easily, communication is the key to Feeling Our Way.

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