put your guns on the table. stop my friend with this fable. your better then you thought. even when you was in a baby cradle. and never was even able. you my friend always fought. but its time to be unshamefull. because you are capable. so let the sunshine in my friend. and dream those dreams again. because you are stable. to finally put the flags down. and put this war to an end
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJan 19, 2011
A good follow up to the previous, older poem, I like the sentiments in this one....Andrew
johnaustin123Eastlake, Ohio USAJan 19, 2011
Ballet for Hillary Clinton:
The World is yours, as it is much mine; You know what is yours, and you lead all great Powers; You will be there for many, many long hours; You give your great strength, to fight what is ours; Thank You Great Lady, for your service and time.
Hillary, Hillary Clinton, you are doing just fine; You are a Great Rose; give the World unconditional Flowers; The world Great Hillary, stands and much so much cowers; You are building great Peace, and many Great Towers; Hillary, Great Hillary, you do draw the line.
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The World is yours, as it is much mine;
You know what is yours, and you lead all great Powers;
You will be there for many, many long hours;
You give your great strength, to fight what is ours;
Thank You Great Lady, for your service and time.
Hillary, Hillary Clinton, you are doing just fine;
You are a Great Rose; give the World unconditional Flowers;
The world Great Hillary, stands and much so much cowers;
You are building great Peace, and many Great Towers;
Hillary, Great Hillary, you do draw the line.
By John Austin
© 2009 John Austin (All rights reserved)
@taxidiotis: LOL
Like the message in this poem. It's good to see you writing in rhyme and setting your poems out much better.
Notice anything else? You are getting more comments now as well. That's because your posts are starting to look and sound more like poetry.
Regards
Fellsman