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Ten Depressions

Been through ten depressions,
Overcame with One,
You!

You,
Picked me up,
Soothed the pain,
Stood by me,
Through thick and thin.

Backed me up,
Said i was right,
Gave me strength,
To walk on by.

Made me laugh,
Made me cry,
Made me long,
Made me high!

A glow in the dark,
A shadow with me,
A glimmer of hope,
A wind within me.

All came crashing,
One fine dawn,
Tone was the problem,
Couldn’t convince you at all.

Am back to square one,
Ten depressions,
Now, you Add,
One to All.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2011

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gnj4u
Hi, mercy,
We all can use A glimmer of hope in our lives and, until the next glimmer appears, it is certainly a challenge to face when one leaves.
pilgrimageoflove
mercy..

I like this .....

You,
Picked me up,
Soothed the pain,
Stood by me,
Through thick and thin.

Backed me up,
Said i was right,
Gave me strength,
To walk on by.

Made me laugh,
Made me cry,
Made me long,
Made me high!

A glow in the dark,
A shadow with me,
A glimmer of hope,
A wind within me.

was beautiful
SUMMIT09
some people just come into our lives for brief time pls dont let neither still your joy
mercy
Thank you guys for your comments! It is nice to feel that I have people out there who care though we do not know each other.
jazzy75
mercy...glad to see you back on the corner and posting.... thanks for sharinghug....such a heartfelt poem. teddybear
mercy
Hey Jazzy! Hello and nice to meet you. Thank you for the comment. You have a great day!applause cheering
Macduff5
hi Mercy...we haven't met before so hello handshake I thought your poem was well written dealing with a subject that plagues so many. thumbs up
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