I wish

by mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin, USA

Feb 2011 816 Views 16 comments

I wish

I wish I could be a bee
I could fly all day
I wish I could be a star
and shine from afar
I wish I could be a cow
and chew some grass right now
I wish I was a hummingbird
and eat nectar and not say a word
I wish I was rich
then I would not b*tch
I wish I was hot
then I would get any woman I want
I wish I could fly
you don't have to ask why
I wish I could bring joy to the depressed
I wish I could feed all the hungry
I wish I could give free health care to all the people
I wish I could visit my family and not feel out of place
I wish I could work at a job and not care about race
I wish I could love everyone
I wish noone was lonely
I wish noone was sad
I wish everyone got along with everyone
I wish you all the happiness in the world

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Posted: Feb 2011

About this poem:

I could go all day on I wish.

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Comments (16)

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaFeb 9, 2011

Your first wish should be to wish for more wishes
I think...lol. Appreciate your sentiments though.

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 9, 2011

This poem.....
IS
..
So terrific fabulous nice lovely cute !
No Joking !
I loved this style of writing ! Cute and lovely!
It looks like my style! Hahaha <don't be sad, i sad it looks like but yours is better for sure.>_<)
I'm jealous you! This is what I Love!!!!
Thank you for this cute n lovely poem! I'll come give you kisses again when i got my office! (now on the way)

LOVED IT A LOT!!!^__________^

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 9, 2011

Very nice!

As for "I wish I was rich, then I... " and "I wish I was hot, then I..." - well, the last parts to those two... wishful thinking? (

maybe?)

-since the rich don't always seem happy - though I think we'd all like to be given the chance to show that we ourselves Would be happy if rich
-every woman will say yes to a hot guy... hmmm.........

Very nice sentiments(and wishes) though!

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 9, 2011

As I promised to u!! My KISSES!!
I LOVED THIS POEM!!
THANK YOU AGAIN!!
^____^

ChroneCremona, Lombardy ItalyFeb 10, 2011

I wish you happiness too! Good rhythm!

I wish I can dance righ now

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaFeb 10, 2011

This wish list could be easily extended and there may be more wishes added if we wish. The one which set me thinking was: "I wish I could visit my family and not feel out of place" - this wish brought sorrow into my heart for reasons very much the same.