it's not nonsense frenchsilk, it brought me back to my teens and those valentines that i sent out anonymously and never getting one back! <---- poor me should have bloody signed me name so they knew who to send one to!
nice write
FrenchsilkOPPort Shepstone, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaFeb 13, 2011
Thanks LB, me too I should have signed and all. I guess we are both a lot more up front now and a good thing too.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandFeb 13, 2011
Frenchsilk...wonderful sensitive write...could sense the yearning..are you sure there was no hint of a past love hidden.....thanks for sharing....Niah
FrenchsilkOPPort Shepstone, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaFeb 13, 2011
Thanks guys and Fellsman I didn't take your remarks badly and agree with you totally that we cannot heve too many happy occasions to celebrate. This poem was a product of half a bottle of good red, hence the melancholy stance.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKFeb 13, 2011
A lovely story, thank you for posting it, I enjoyed the read, very much......Kindest regards....Andrew...xxx
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 13, 2011
Dear Frenchsilk
A glass or two of red? What an agreeable way to wind down at the end of a trying day...
Hi, Frenchsilk, A paper heart is all that I can send but I send it in poetic friendship from this Poet's Corner of the world to yours to comfort The space that is my yearning heart.
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nice write
I guess we are both a lot more up front now and a good thing too.
This poem was a product of half a bottle of good red, hence the melancholy stance.
A glass or two of red? What an agreeable way to wind down at the end of a trying day...
Kindest regards
Bill
A paper heart is all that I can send but I send it in poetic friendship from this Poet's Corner of the world to yours to comfort The space that is my yearning heart.