I GUESS YOU GET TO UNDERSTAND WHEN A PERSON TURNS THIRTY YEAH MAN THIRTY AND DIRTY BUT AGE IS JUST A WALL TO WAIL WHILE BUIDING A FOUNDATION NAIL BY NAIL HAMMERING WITH PRECISION AND VERY WELL AIMED "IT IS MINE AND IT IS DONE " YOU PROCLAIMED UNTIL YOU REALIZED A CONFLICT OVER THERE AND BEING OLD AND GETTING SICK WOULD BE FILLED AND DEFILED BY FEAR IF ONLY OUR FUTURES COULD FLOAT WITH ANGELS ON A CLOUD AND A FEATHER YET AND SIILL EVERY DAY OF YOUR LIFE IS LIKE MORE FIGID WHETHER I DISAPPROVEE OF THE MAJESTY IN HONESTY AND ITS PLOT SO MAY I JUST LAY DOWN AND DIE IN THIS VERY SPOT? FOR EYES TO FAIL, YOUR LEGS OF RUBBER MADE AND WITH EVERY HEARTBEAT YOU BEG YOUR SPIRIT SOON TO FADE BUT THEN THERE ARE DAYS WITH ENDLESS AFTERNOONS WHEN AGEEDNESS SCREAMS IN YOUR EARS SIMPLY TO MULTIPLY THE FEARS YOU KNOW WHAT?...... I DON'T THINK I LIKE THAT A BIT AND THE LAST ATTEMPT AT GREAT SUCCESS IS REPLACED BY LEARINNG HOW TO KNIT SO I YEARN TO DO THAT WHICH MILLIONS OF PEOPLE HAVE DONE WITH COURAGE, THE WILL AND A VOW TO END MY FUTURE IN THE HERE AND NOW BECAUSE I WILL NO LONGER FEEL AS IF I HAVE NOT THE MEANS TO WONDER AT THE SUN AND IN THE DARKENSS OF GROWING OLD THE MOON BE DONE BUT NO ONE HAS THE POWER OVER A CLOCK WITH GOLDEN HANDS AND UNDERSTOOD IS SUDDENLY THE FACT THAT THE UNIVERSE AND CONFIDNECE HAVEFINALLY BEEN ALLIGNED AND THEN YOU GET TO THE POINT WHERE ONE IS WISE AND KNOWS WE WEREN'T MEANT TO BE CONFINED THEN I SEE I A ROPE AND AN EXIT WORTHY OF DEATH HANG BY THAT ROPE WITH MY THROAT RESTRICTED OF BREATH OR, WHEN THE DEEPEST EMOTION OF DARKNESS HAS BEGUN PERHAPS THAT IS THE TIME FOR THE STAGE DIRECTOR TO CALL FOR THE GUN BUT HERE IS MY CONUNDRUM I CHOOSE TO CALL CONFUSION I AM AN INCONSISTENT AND TAWDRY CONCLUSION BUT I CANNOT SUMMON THE WILL TO DIE AND NEVER KICK THE CHAIR DO I MAKE MYSELF AMPLY CLEAR? I WANT TO DIE BUT I AM AFRAID TO GO AND RUN FOR THE GUN AND THEN THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO DECIDE WHEN ENOUGH IS ENGOUGH BECAUSE AT NINETY YEARS OLD EVERYTHING IS ROUGH THE ONLY THINGS LEFT ARE RELICS AND REMEMBRANCES OF DANCING DOWN BROADWAY WHEN OUR FACES WEREN'T WITHERING AWAY BY WRINKLES WORN AND ALL THE FABRIC OF UNCERTAINTY WE HAVE TORN YET MY FRIEND FROM DOWN THE BLOCK DID HIMSSELF IN AND HIS NAME WAS HOWARD AND I WAS ALIVE STILL TO STRIVE YES HE DID, HE JUST KICKED THE CHAIR IN DESPITE THE FACT THAT HE KNEW IT WAS A MORTAL SIN SO NOW I ASK, BETWEEN ME WANTING TO DIE BUT NEVER ABLE TO KICK THE CHAIR OR THE MAN WHO WANTS TO KILL HIMSELF AND DOES LIKE HOWARD, I ASK YOU, WHO IS THE BIGGER COWARD? (C) 2011.....~free cee!~
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
ACTUALLY I BEGAN ASKING THAT LAST QUESTION FOR AT LEAST TEN YEARS...THE WAY I ALSO WANT TO KNOW WHAT A PERSON WHO WAS BORN BLIND DREAMS ABOUT?
I like the Apostle Paul's angle on it all.... "For me... to LIVE is Christ! To die is gain!" Makes the whole of it rather simple when seen through eyes of faith. Awesome write Freedumb!! Thanks for sharing! Some good insight as well Andrew!
We cannot summon the will to die, cause we are born with the will to live. We strive to live a better life, not even knowing why we do it, knowing well we are going to die after all. It takes great courage to live in this unfair world, but we continue to live irrespective of everything, as if there were no death at all. Kicking the chair is the last resort: when there is emptiness in place of hope and you have nothing to rely on, nothing to look forward to, then it is up you to decide whether to live or die.
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 17, 2011
freedumb
perhaps the (bigger coward) believes he has more to lose or has something to contribute.
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perhaps the (bigger coward) believes he has more to lose or has something to contribute.
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CAUGHT BETWEEN A KNOCK AND A HARD FACE one discovers life and your poem. Thanks for posing the question for us to ponder with you.