brilliant write cafetwo. but it is sad most of the noises in america go unheard they are so tunneled here on there own doings you be surprised the people i talked to around this country as a semi truck driver an unbelivable amount of people can't even tell you name of the street thats across the way from where they work or even tell you where there is a building only 2 blocks away.. kickit22.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 3, 2011
Thank you niah'. I think we all are eclisped by the haze to some extent.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKApr 4, 2011
AH!.....Life from a poets point of view, so hard to do, as we seem to view things from a distance and close up and personal simultaneously....and yet differentiate between the two....in there too will be our wishes for all mankind....Good write my friend, well written, well said....Kindest regards...Andrew...
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 4, 2011
Thanks andrew. As always you sum it up quite nicely.'Seeing things close up and far away at the same time. I think what I do is to try an capture states of mind, which is what we all do. But it is our own state of mind we try to round up. To capture the mood and atmosphere of poetic thought is an interesting adventure. Great day my friend.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKApr 4, 2011
Hi Cafe
I loved this from beginning to end, you write in an economical and undersdated fashion, and there is much wisdom in your words.
Best wishes
Bill
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 4, 2011
Thank you Mr. Fellsman.. I guess if I can't say it in simple words I shouldn't be saying it. Simple words and the meaning seems to take care of itself.
Hi, cafetwo2010, Ah, the bar for the poet and poetry has been set high. A thoughtful write with the perspectives of the lion and the lamb poetically joined.
This is a carefully structured poem with a logical flow: starting with different sounds of world the poet brings us to this sound - a poet's voice, emerging from "the ashes of destruction," speaking words of truth and hope; though standing in haze he is for ever watchful, keeps vigil ready to sound alarm and react on the first occasion as a good and faithful citizen. Being a poet means that much and a lot more. Thanks for the poem and dedication to our poetic spirit.
Excellent statement on the power of words and sounding alarms to injustice. Nice tribute to the poets. If only words could always quell the guns...but sometimes words and public opinion can sway a nation or a cause.Kudos Cafetwo.
nabiiCincinnati, Ohio USAApr 7, 2011
Beautiful!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011
Thank you gnj4.. The bar for the poet has indeed been set high by virtue of the extremes of injustice and perhaps an unvoiced plea for clarity from someone..anyone. I suppose we as writers of the more refined sentiments must dig deeper within ourselves to draw out the truth of what we really need to convey. We must find a way to speak above the 'noises' in the world..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011
O marikia..As always, I have to smile when I read your comments , because your interpretive skills proves for the zillionth time that there may be people who write, but there's the teacher who can explain what has been written. You're that type of teacher. You're explanation is exactly the meaning I intended. I could never do what you do. I feel especially graced by your comments.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011
Thank you ladybee. That is an interesting thought. The sound of it might create all kinds of moods depending who was speaking. I like to hear women read this sort of thing.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011
Thank you boyshchrm. Words to sway a nation.. Perhaps something one of us writes will do just that. Who knows. Many here, I believe possess the ability to connect the right thoughts with the right words to capture the imagination. I suppose we have to know which lock to open.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011
Thank you nabii..Your poems are a work of art to me. To me you have the pure heart of the poet with the a most refined eloquence.
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an oracle in the
haze..between what
is, and what shall
be
The poets voice..
Ready at the
watchtower
Stunning poem, so evocative.
I loved this from beginning to end, you write in an economical and undersdated fashion, and there is much wisdom in your words.
Best wishes
Bill
Ah, the bar for the poet and poetry has been set high. A thoughtful write with the perspectives of the lion and the lamb poetically joined.
sounding alarms to injustice. Nice tribute to
the poets. If only words could always quell
the guns...but sometimes words and public opinion
can sway a nation or a cause.Kudos Cafetwo.