I remember when you didn’t remember the time nor the place I recall how you didn’t recall our first kiss and how it made your heart race I know you’ve forgotten what you swore you’d never forget And I know you didn’t know that I’ve loved you since the moment we first met
Simply to help your memory function well and be precise You opined that if this is what forever is like you wanted a slice Your words spoke softly of romance as well did your heart And I’m certain you don’t recall promising to give me your all from the start
You can’t envision the first time I came into your vision Or swearing to every god there is we will never suffer division You swore we’d be one and never be done making each other’s heart race Yet I remember our firsts of everything especially our first emphatic and embrionic embrace
moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaAug 2, 2011
Sorry Freepoet You're not on your own in this.We all have hands up on this one.It’s sorrowful how fast a first can so easily become a last. So true. you write it how it is. I like this.
We all were that "fortunate" to undergo such experience, we all were that "lucky," Free, not only you. I relate to this poem and thank you for it! Poignant and all, and how familiar ... when mentioning lost love you always refer to me ... I have an experience of years, maybe centuries. Hope you will live over it and come out fully recovered and ready for a new adventure. Cheers, fellow poet! This was a gem of a poem!
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 2, 2011
I must remember to remember to lay my book on the back shelve, it helps me grow. Sorry free that is the first thing to hit me as I stamped on the slugs. Enjoyed
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You're not on your own in this.We all have hands up on this one.It’s sorrowful how fast a first can so easily become a last.
So true. you write it how it is. I like this.
Sorry free that is the first thing to hit me as I stamped on the slugs.
Enjoyed