Tumble Weeds

Such stories tumble weeds tell,
insinuating that they'll always be around
that they've found some common ground
and how it was only you who could stop the wind.
But, thats never really the case.
Truth is they're just stuck on the barbed wire
inching towards freedom in the breeze.
Just when you get use to their smell
and that sound they make as they tap the ground,
the north wind picks up calling them away
leaving you with nothing but broken twigs
and brief moments of sweet entanglements
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Posted: Sep 2009

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Blizza801
Thanks for taking the time to read =)
andrew149
thankyou blizza, I liked this one, a thought provoking read....and I liked the other one posted too, so am giving two comments for one...lol....bit more space left here......lol.........andrew.
gypsyheart
Very well expressed again Blizza.You got an amazing gift for writing poetry with captured emotion and artist eyes.I see a great future in store for you.Thank you for sharing your talent with us.I love your poetryhug bouquet
Sunnn
Agreed with gypsyheart!
Great future in stores. Bestsellers.

I am so proud that we were the first people to read your poems!
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trurorob
Great Blizza801,
felt the solitude and loneliness in this one, could imagine the tumbleweeds, made me remember Fargo
Rob
Blizza801
Thank you !!
I have been pondering the idea of writing a book of poetry for years....just was never quite sure...thank you for the boost of confidence !!!
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