True love

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Aug 2011 696 Views 11 comments

True love..

Author: cafetwo2010

Time after time
you forgave me..
You kept pulling me
out of the pit..
I was lost in my soul..
my reason was gone..
But every time you loved
me back to life..
And again..I fell..
How long will you continue
to strive with me?
I think I know..
Until I'm like you..then
I will know true love~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Aug 2011

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Comments (11)

country_lady67clarion, Pennsylvania USAAug 17, 2011

Time after time
you forgave me..

very beautiful words..cafe...

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAAug 17, 2011

very sad cafetwo

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 17, 2011

Dear Cafe
Nice poem

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusAug 17, 2011

[But every time you loved me back to life..]

this brilliant phrase captured the essence of it all for me... thanks...

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 17, 2011

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaAug 24, 2011

You are not a student of love, Cafe, it is the other way round: you may be considered among the best teachers giving away instructions on how to love, for love can not be contained in a heart with love in abundance, seeking for vent. Wish many were like you! Good luck!

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandAug 25, 2011

Beautiful poetry cafetwo! I loved it.

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaOct 17, 2011

I have commented already, but since "True Love" popped up as a reminder I thought I should say something before it disappears again. Love has no time or space boundaries, if it is true, so rest assured it will last for as long as you breathe, and don't ever try to change cause she loves you the way you are. Thank you for sharing!

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southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAMar 18, 2017

I see this poem as God being your true lover....he forgives....he will not forsake you.....gives you a new life when everything is almost lost...he will always love you...SM

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godsprincessOwego, New York USAMar 19, 2017

I agree with South Miami. God loves you no matter what and continues to do so even when we fall. He patiently waits and works on our heart. Thanks for sharing Cafe.

Kathy