I watch the sun as it shines on the last of the beautiful leaves I watch as one floats to the ground Gently on the soft, caressing breeze
I watch and listen.... To squirrels chatter as they scatter Munching, storing, crunching nuts With hopes of growing fatter
Canadian geese fly over my head Honking their sad and lonely goodbyes On their way to somewhere warmer HUH?! I cant believe my eyes...
While I was lost deep in my thoughts The winds of change had started to blow The air had grown colder, the sky grew darker And down came white flakes of snow
As I silently say farewell to fall I pause to take one last look Time to go in, sit before the fire With a cup of hot tea and a good book
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
I know its still early but wrote this last year.. for a bulletin board at school. Thought you may enjoy it.
I did enjoy I loved the squirrels, and Candian geese, I loved the lot really
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 22, 2011
Dear Countrylady I thought that you did a pretty good job with this piece,its real life energy and the picture you painted with words made me feel as though i was there,well composed piece indeed,best wishes to you friend,keep up the fine work.
a gifted poet you are. don't think any different. kickit.
thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandAug 22, 2011
Lovely descriptive poem dear Country Lady! Enjoyed your delightful write.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 22, 2011
Hi country lady
This is a really descriptive and imaginative write - that fire and hot drink sound so appealing...
Best wishes
Bill
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaAug 22, 2011
You painted a beautiful picture that transformed the reader
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 22, 2011
While I was lost deep in my thoughts The winds of change had started to blow The air had grown colder, the sky grew darker And down came white flakes of snow
This is just beautiful.
Lavender_BlueBirmingham, West Midlands, England UKAug 22, 2011
Beautiful sentiments and images depicted in this lovely poem CL.
Comments (12)
I thought that you did a pretty good job with this piece,its real life energy and the picture you painted with words made me feel as though i was there,well composed piece indeed,best wishes to you friend,keep up the fine work.
Sincerely Yours
PN1
a gifted poet you are. don't think any different.
kickit.
This is a really descriptive and imaginative write - that fire and hot drink sound so appealing...
Best wishes
Bill
The winds of change had started to blow
The air had grown colder, the sky grew darker
And down came white flakes of snow
This is just beautiful.
Peace and Poetry,
LB
Your poem brought fall feelings right to me - BUT, I am really not ready for them!!! Nicely penned!