Divine Creation

by fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida, USA

Aug 2011 598 Views 13 comments

Divine Creation

---- IMAGE REMOVED because photobucket.com no longer allows embedded images ----Night time sets in
Dividing the day from its own glory
Merging one beautiful canvas into infinite beauty
Pink and red highlight the skyline
Carressing the darkening clouds slowly parading
Circling around certain destruction
That only its own eye can see
Sunset falling behind the horizon
Casting a reflection that the heart can no longer hold
Wanting to embrace the day
Reminiscent of wandering dreams
But unable to place specifics only broken memories of lost love
Calmness overwhelms as darkness swallows the light
A universe of pacified silence accross the vast emptiness
Stars burning bright but just to keep our mortal thoughts occupied
Wishes echo through galactic lite years of ancient radio transmission
Bouncing from one planet onto the next milkyway
Searching for anyone or anything to hear its whispering lost voice
A reminder that we are not alone
Rather extraterrestrial life or heavenly beings
I am a divine creation
Not some evolved monkey
but made in the image of something greater than I
The Divine Creation

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Posted: Aug 2011

About this poem:

Just a free verse uncertain to where it would lead but eventually to a thought and that thought is science contridicts itself if it truly believes in homoerectus something of an oxymoron

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Comments (13)

country_lady67clarion, Pennsylvania USAAug 31, 2011

Yes you are a divine creation ...

beautifully said

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandAug 31, 2011

This poem is just divinely wonderful. I agree with CL, you are one Divine Creation with your poetry!

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 31, 2011

This is excellent writing.

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaAug 31, 2011

Thanks, fjamesj9701, I like poems that have some knowledge put into beautiful verses like you have done it. Great!

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 30, 2013

i am a divine creation nicely penned word perfect i enjoyed

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 30, 2013

Thank you those I never said thatnk you to in the past Mr MMPNUno, Thelmatalla, COdettea, and Vyoleta. Sorry Im about a year late or so

...Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 30, 2013

Thank you DH for reading, I like seeing some old ones make it back to the surface...Jesse

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 30, 2013

i thought id look through a few of your earlier ones ive two i liked of my own bang tidy a mad one i laughed when i wrote it and the lioness you have some good ones i brought your favourite one you asked about a week or more up a theatre one i was waiting your response bring it back up you probaly over looked it i do that sometimes myself

what do you think of that for a smile ha ha

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 30, 2013

No my friend i havent really been on , cause i try to read everyone and everything. I enjoy everyones stuff here. Give me the title, i woukd like to read it...jesse

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandApr 30, 2013

Hi Jesse

Great Title.

Lovely deep inspiring poem.

Searching for anyone or anything to hear its whispering lost voice.

I just love that line...

A warm feel-good factor after reading

Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts