The Roman guards joked among themselves as they cast lots for the robe of the crucfied Christ 'It was all so strange, it seemed as if the ground under my feet was expanding and contracting in birth pangs, and that the very heavens were pressing down upon us- I could feel and taste the atmosphere and I felt my soul was being refined like fire in the contest of the ages- I, Lucas Perillias, Roman guard,won the robe we cast lots for- I had no stomach for these Christians and this man was the ring leader and now sentenced to death by Pilate- I squeezed this robe in my fingers as I turned and glanced at this man Jesus on the cross- I was half laughing and mocking with the other guards when out of some strange curiosity I momentarily locked gaze with this Jesus- As with the hundreds we crucified before I'd grown accustomed to the angry sneers of our victums and the many who had spat hatred down on us in their torturous dying- But here was a look I had never expected- He seemed to be looking directly at me and for moments I couldn't understand the expression- I looked away quickly for fear of the other guards thinking I could possibly have an interest in this criminal- But that look he was giving me..so strange..so deeply had he gripped my soul with those penetrating eyes- I saw no hatred as the others had shown..there was nothing in his face but the purest compassion- It was if he had been staring at me all the time in all that agony and with all that blood- I loosened the grip with which I clenched his robe and I could not make myself turn away from the gaze of this man- Then the whole sky became dark and the earth shook and everyone became frightened- By this time the other guards knew I was somehow smitten and even transformed by this man and they began mocking me- But I couldn't move..I was on my knees feeling all hatred draining out of my soul..what was happening to me? It was raining..and all the voices of mockery faded away and there I was staring into the very face of love..and I know now..into the face of the almighty himself who loved me inspite of these Roman Nails~
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 5, 2011
Ty elo..' It difficult to squeeze such a momemtous story into such small compass but I hope I created enough atmosphere to do justice to its meaning..Thank you for reading..
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 5, 2011
cafe,,that was superb,a stunning write of true love for his love is amazing,,i love this jim
Yes, the look of compassion can make wonders, transform at a moment's notice and save a soul, even the most desperate and lost to evil. We may do terrible things and hurt each other not knowing it or compos mentis, but it needs a little sympathy and compassion, and humane attitude to let go bad habits and make amends. Roman Nails may hurt same as our misdeeds, but we are not ultimate culprits, suffice it to look into His eyes and be transformed for our own good, as did that Roman soldier. One of the most edifying writes I've ever read here. Thank you!
Almost like being there....incredible story.....the face of compassion even directed towards the hand of His own executioners...
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 5, 2011
Awesome,an inspiration story,i like how you captured its true meaning
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 5, 2011
But I couldn't move..I was on my knees feeling all hatred draining out of my soul..what was happening to me? It was raining..and all the voices of mockery faded away and there I was staring into the very face of love..and I know now..into the face of the almighty himself who loved me inspite of these Roman Nails~
Excellent write cafe, tears were welling up in my eyes reading this.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 5, 2011
Ty jeddah dear..' I knew you would like this ..
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 5, 2011
Hi cafe
Incredible narrative - this must be your best yet, or very close to it...
Best wishes
Bill
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 5, 2011
Ty Marikia..I really needed about 10 pages worth to draw out the way I see this story but I was afraid it wasent going to fit so I had to curtail which breaks down the atmosphere I want to create. But your analysis is remarkable as always. I could always expand this poem...Your comments are of the highest quality..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 5, 2011
Ty Yank..' As I was saying, 'I wanted to paint a broader introduction based on my in debth study of this subject but space was short. thank you for your comments..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 5, 2011
Ty Poetnumber1..' I think it's more the power of the story itself that captures attention. Your comment is encouraging..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 5, 2011
Ty Odette..'Your opinion and response is highly valued..I think you know that..
Comments (19)
thanks for sharing and blessed day always
draining out of my soul..what was happening to me?
It was raining..and all the voices of mockery faded away
and there I was staring into the very face of love..and I
know now..into the face of the almighty himself who loved
me inspite of these Roman Nails~
Excellent write cafe, tears were welling up in my eyes reading this.
Incredible narrative - this must be your best yet, or very close to it...
Best wishes
Bill