Tears in the Attic

For years her poem slept between
the pages of an old book in the
attic..
She loved me and I loved her but
something went wrong and we parted
For years I languished in guilt and
self doubt about what went went wrong
Time had blunted most of the hellish
pain that had ripped through my soul
in midnight hours
But still..the question of why had
lingered on..
I unfolded the poem which by now had
yellowed with time
It seemed a wiff of her perfume had emited
it's last aroma as I opened the neatly
folded paper
Her tears smugged the ink within the lines
of her soulful words
and this stained poem was her final
memorial to a love that had been choked
by the thorns of misunderstanding
She wrote in words of gentleness that make
me cry for the magic of her touch
What was I without her?
How could I have gone on so long when
the taste of her lips had awakened me
for a thousand nights
What can a man be..what can I be..without her
In dreams I fall upon her neck with kisses
of my soul
In day light I grieve for her dimond moons
There is no sun that can brighten my day
For she is the day of my heart
But where can she be now/
Who has stoled the preciousness of my heart
Bowed over I clutch this poem as a broken
Man
Sun rise has lost its meaning
Starlight is for the magic of another
All I have left are words of breathless
Sorrow
All that remains of me are shadows of
what could have been
All is gone
All I have are tears in the attic~
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2011
About this poem:
The devasting feeling of lost love..

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Comments (36)

moonontide
Wow!!!! How has this gone unnoticed. It wrenches me in two but I love it and have felt every word.Great poetry.So real bouquet bouquet
Maxeen_1
cafetwo Beautiful write...
Heart wrenching with such feeling,


"There is no sun that can brighten my day
"For she is the day of my heart
Mycalling
Masterful poem Cafe, Love this part...

It seemed a wiff of her perfume had emited
it's last aroma as I opened the neatly
folded paper...very visualthumbs up
cafetwo2010
Ty Moonontide..' I tried to capture a real emotion and then draw it out. Glad you like this one. teddybear
cafetwo2010
Ty Maxeen1..' I guess this is poetry of the heart..Guys feel stuff too.teddybear
cafetwo2010
Ty Mike..'Certain phrases sometimes take on a life of their own and become lil' poems within themselves..Thank you my friend..thumbs up beer
marikia
"For years her poem slept between
the pages of an old book..." and then, after many years its content brought poignant memories and regrets to you - painfully heart-wrenching. Wish it could have been the other way round. Hope sharing this poem gave you some relief! Kindest regards!
Fellsman
Hi Cafe


This is real poetry with every word riven from the soul: Years ago I read that poets write their best work when they are hurting, and your hurt is evident in every line of this finely crafted poem.

I salute your poem, I feel for your lost love...


Great write

Bill wine wine
Odette67
Stunningly Beautiful in all it's poignancy.heart beating
Macduff5
Hi Cafe,

This is truly a remarkable piece of writing. It reads like poetic prose, as if it should be part of chapter of a novel. Some very beautiful imagery here. cheers
cafetwo2010
Ty Marikia..' Thanks for your wonderful perspective. Almost a poem like analysis.teddybear
cafetwo2010
Ty Mr. Fellsman..' The story is made up but I captured a feeling of lost love and simply tried to give it a name and face. Thank you my friend.thumbs up
cafetwo2010
Ty Odette..' Would this be a kind of sweet-sorrow write? Thank you dear.kiss
cafetwo2010
Sorry to change up..I thought the new title is much mor fitting and interesting..crying thumbs up
Odette67
Dear cafe...I concur with you over the title change...I love this poem.heart beating purple heart
cafetwo2010
Ty Odette..' Sometimes I get a lil' lazy on the title..Gotta watch that..grin teddybear
boyshchrm6
Truly a great love CafeTwo. Your feelings
very real and relatable. Cry your tears
and then go on to create new fond
memories...for what else is there my friend.
angel angel angel comfort thumbs up kiss kiss sigh angel
Ayhra
Lovely poem Cafe2. Beautiful writing applause bouquet teddybear
Lavender_Blue
I am drawn to this poem because of my love for nostalgia and precious things, Cafe.

Fine writing.

LB
Yankee4you
You've really succeeded in in bringing this feeling downstairs....."It seemed a wiff of her perfume had emited
it's last aroma as I opened the neatly
folded paper"....wow!!! Very cool line.....
cafetwo2010
Ty boyshchrm6..' I guess I need to come down out of the attic. Mabey..thumbs up
cafetwo2010
TY Ayhra..' Thank you dear..kiss
cafetwo2010
Ty yank..' I guess that phrase rang a bell with some writers. Thanks my friend. I think I need to visit the attic more often..thumbs up beer
netman
Love your writing cafetwo2010, very emotional

cheers
cafetwo2010
Thank you my friend Netman..' Always an encouragement to hear from readers from out of the blue..wine thumbs up
Earlgreytea
This is one of the best poems i have ever read on this site, wow!!! thank you, pure Zen...
lucy777
VERY GOOD WRITE!
cafetwo2010
Ty Earl..' Am I missing something? This seemed to be one of my usual type poems but I'm happy quite a few seem to take a liking to it. I'm just trying to keep pace with all the poets here. But since you've given such high praise Earl, tonight at the Castle Party a special fair maiden shall be delivered 'unto you..'thumbs up wine
cafetwo2010
Ty Lucy..' You have been appointed 'Fair Maiden777.' The king at the castle would like to introduce you to Earl..wine kiss
orientalkoru
"Time had blunted most of the hellish
pain that had ripped through my soul
in midnight hours
But still..the question of why had
lingered on.."

Time heals the wound but the scar remains...
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece...
cafetwo2010
Ty Orientalkoru..' Thank you most kindly.angel teddybear
poppyred
Oh Goodness.This is so lovely.teddybear teddybear teddybear
cafetwo2010
Oldies but goodies.
Cafe
kiss
godsprincessonline today!
attic!!! Oh dear!

Kathy
cafetwo2010
Kathy..
I guess I best stay out of the attic. teddybear
professor
Cafe
godsprincessonline today!
It looks like your now out of the attic and in the backyard! laugh

Kathy teddybear
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