Nice flow and clear message Lucy. Smell the Roses and don't sweat the small stuff. Seems we always need a reminder. TY
CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAOct 17, 2011
Nice write. Easy to forget about the small things that makes life so worthwhile.
lucy777OPgunbarrel city, Texas USAOct 18, 2011
THANK YOU BOTH VERY MUCH!
shadowman3xpwexford, Wexford IrelandOct 18, 2011
Nice one Lucy, Well put together good feel to it.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 2, 2011
Beautiful poem Lucy
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 2, 2011
Nice poem, love the message Lucy :)
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKNov 2, 2011
Hi Lucy
I really think the brains of most people who write poetry are hard wired to appreciate the more beautiful aspects of nature. Whilst not all hard workers are grumblers, your point is very well made in this piquant poem.
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Smell the Roses and don't sweat
the small stuff. Seems we always
need a reminder. TY
Well put together
good feel to it.
I really think the brains of most people who write poetry are hard wired to appreciate the more beautiful aspects of nature. Whilst not all hard workers are grumblers, your point is very well made in this piquant poem.
Best wishes
Bill