Dear Lucy, it's normal for us to search for a perfect partner in life, a twin soul or a soulmate.... but we can indeed make ourselves whole by giving us priority first than anyone else if a relationship can't work. We have to move on. Well said, nicely written. Thanks!
lucy777OPgunbarrel city, Texas USANov 7, 2011
Thank good point!
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 7, 2011
Hi Lucy, I believe one can be happy by itself, but plennitude comes out of two. Man and woman belong together, they just match as two pieces of the same puzzle, but as in the puzzle, the pieces have to match perfectly with no pressure, it can't be just any piece. I guess all we can do is open doors and allow things to happen, to flow, because I am afraid there are things you don't look for them, you just find them (or not) Just another opinion :) Nice writte my friend. Thank you for sharing
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKNov 7, 2011
Soulmate by: lucy Thankyou dear lucy for a questioning interesting & searching write ..hugs x
lucy777OPgunbarrel city, Texas USANov 7, 2011
Thanks Maxeen,,,
lucy777OPgunbarrel city, Texas USANov 7, 2011
Ayhra Thelma and you make some good points! Thanks!
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKNov 8, 2011
Hi Lucy
This short series of rhyming couplets makes the case for a soulmate precisely. Whether the soul acquires a mate is indeed left to fate. A good write...
Bill
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 8, 2011
I believe each soul is unique and whole
So how can it have a mate? and to pair them is left to fate?
Could it be the part that is our heart
Don't want to be left alone and on its own?
So to the soul it conspires its desires
Making the soul think that with out a mate it cant be whole?
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Thankyou dear lucy for a questioning
interesting & searching write ..hugs x
This short series of rhyming couplets makes the case for a soulmate precisely. Whether the soul acquires a mate is indeed left to fate. A good write...
Bill
is unique and whole
So how can it have a mate?
and to pair them is left to fate?
Could it be the part
that is our heart
Don't want to be left alone
and on its own?
So to the soul it conspires
its desires
Making the soul
think that with out a mate it cant be whole?
Beautiful poem Lucy