First blossom and first love are beautiful To see affection in my girlfriend's eyes Like flowers on a bush are plentiful Although - amidst - a few thorns did arise. Growing in confidence - though still bashful We think first loves - perfection realized - From my pen - this poetry - now unfurls As I try to explain why I love girls.
I don't write here to talk about a fling Or our first faltering indiscretions But of the kind of love that will take wing - (What teachers can't explain in lessons). Now any kind of loves a funny thing And it is blind and heedless of directions - More so when we are young - it's free and feckless Not conscious of itself - so wild and reckless.
A few years on and how do I compare - What once had been so innocent and free? When we broke up all was a black despair; Till I saw other girls surrounding me - Other maidens - blonde - brunette - and so fair - (Though it is true that "all is vanity") I could see the most sensible directive - Was held by those with feminine perspective.
Go forward a few more years yet again From this bountiful cornucopia What some call affection - no one can explain - Compared with first love's bright utopia. Still, I need love - like a desert needs rain - Any girl you have you make the most of her - For all are beautiful in their own way And when the sun is shining - go make hay.
Every native blossom has its tree And every human soul a counterpart - What's wrong for you - may be just right for me And vice a versa (until death we part) Every woman has a kind of beauty - Be she virtuous - or be she a tart - From my pen -this poetry - has unfurled - I hope this explains why I love girls.
Very sincere inspiration LCBR. As you love your girls we love our boys. Their is so much beauty when two lovers are for real. Thanks for sharing. SM
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 17, 2016
So it was, so it is now, and so it will be; indeed the more some things change the more they are the same. I would say this to the younger CS members (of similar inclinations) reading this poem:
Where I was; you are now, What I am now; you will become.
Believe it or not us "oldies" have been there and done that. Thanks SM, for your comment - and thanks for all your reads. lcbr.
kle76amnew york, New York USAApr 14, 2020
Virtuous or just a tart She can always touch someone's heart Thanks for the read.
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
kle, thanks for the kind words....
Mercedes_00Greater Sydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
Beautiful BR..
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
Thanks merc....You know, you don't have to "esoteric" to write poetry. Maybe you could post something here;-just write from your heart, about your experiences (good or bad, or whatever, is all you have to do)...
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
....typo, sorry merc, "be" esoteric...
Mercedes_00Greater Sydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
Nothing wrong with my poetry I just won't expose myself like that on this site..Another site I was affiliated with I would post my poems on the poetry forum.
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
why not merc?
Mercedes_00Greater Sydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
That's not it at all...It's not important..Anyway I wouldn't accept criticism simply because my thoughts and what I feel go way beyond the heart..
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
You can disable comments, on a poem, if you want, merc
Mercedes_00Greater Sydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
Trolls can still take it and race with it..Thanks but no thanks
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
Different section of the site, merc
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
poetry, is like music, merc, it does not need to be complex, to be beautiful...
Mercedes_00Greater Sydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 16, 2020
I started writing poetry growing up in Leichhardt..When my mum walked out on my dad and us kids for a man 10 years younger than herself who was my dads business partner with their greyhounds.
I was 13 I just started putting pain to paper.
I do have a few saucy ones that I reckon would curl a mans toes..No it's not coming on cs
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 21, 2020
Thanks for the comments merc.....
Mercedes_00Greater Sydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 22, 2020
Your welcome
lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 22, 2020
Thanks for the comment. Still waters run deep, and true love rarely runs smooth - or so they say....
Comments (21)
Kathy
As you love your girls we love our boys. Their is so much beauty when two lovers are for real.
Thanks for sharing. SM
Where I was; you are now,
What I am now; you will become.
Believe it or not us "oldies" have been there and done that.
Thanks SM, for your comment - and thanks for all your reads.
lcbr.
She can always touch someone's heart
Thanks for the read.
I was 13 I just started putting pain to paper.
I do have a few saucy ones that I reckon would curl a mans toes..No it's not coming on cs