The Secret Glade

Within a forest in a glade,
Is Nature's finest green brocade,
It's nestled by a secret stream,
Inside the mirror of a dream.

If I should pause, to change direction,
Go to that place of soft reflection,
To sit beneath a sylvan bower,
Some dappled, sun splashed, shady hour,


A sacred glen, where Nature's free,
And shadows weave a tracery,
That laces through this hidden dell,
Where is that place? - I shall not tell.

In this green forest filled with trees,
Birds singing in their canopies,
Life is filled with extant power,
From trembling leaf to tip of flower,

Sun shining on a cloudless day,
Give me peace from the world's dismay,
To think a while in solitude,
An unspoiled place of rectitude,

I wish now for some sweet release,
And hope this song may never cease,
Within that wild and ancient glade,
Where lyrebirds sing in serenade,

In every leaf of every branch,
A gentle breeze will make them dance,
It's nestled by a secret stream,
My blissful sweet poetic dream.




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Posted: Feb 25

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ladyjewel
From crazy and rushed to quite a peace lips
ladyjewel
blushing "and peace" what did I say about crazy and rushed laugh
lovecanbereal
Thanks for the comment, LJ. I'm not quite sure, what you mean, by "crazy, and rushed", (you can elaborate if you like). This is a poem under construction, so a few stanzas to be added yet. Anyway, thanks for the comments, always appreciated.




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ladyjewel
My mood was crazy and rushed, I clicked on the poem and it made me stop and breathe, for some strange reason at that time I felt content for a few seconds in time.
Transported into a gentle fantasy listening to the stream, somewhere I could hide from the outside world safe and away from everyone.
lilygold76
Lcbr...this is so soothing & beautiful,mystic,just 4 lines but conjures a lot.Thank you,waiting for the rest.teddybear
lovecanbereal
LJ, thanks for the other comment. Now I understand.


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lovecanbereal
Lilygold,

Comment very much appreciated. (It seems I've struck a chord, with this one). More coming, in the next few weeks.


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lovecanbereal
Ok, the poem is completed, now....
lilygold76
This is amazing,you are a wonderful poet...you have created such awe,such tranquillity,I wish I could find such a spot,but I just have to view nature from a gilded cage.So beautifully crafted.Thank you so much for creating this serenity that I can at least dream of.purple heart rose
lovecanbereal
Lillygold,

Thanks again for the compliments. This is a poetic idyll, an idealized thing, although there are still, some such places left on earth, that come close to "my poetic dream"




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lilygold76
Its like,"My Elusive Dream,"thank you,Mizzy4 is also an amazing Nature poet.its so soothing to read such poems.
southmiami4321online today!
LCBR,I read your poem as I listened to your lyrebirds singing.
Your secret blade made me feel your sweet poetic dream. Very nice . SMbouquet
lovecanbereal
Lillygold,

Thanks for the comment. It's always nice, to get some positive feedback, in the Poets' Corner.




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lovecanbereal
Southmiami

Once again, thanks for the commentary. You are one of my regular commentators, and for that, Thankyou, it is appreciated.


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ladyjewel
Came back to sit down on the grass and loose myself in the peace and beauty hug

To let go of what I thought was real and get ready to try again teddybear
Mizzy4
Well written poem Lcbr,
Very enjoyable read.

Mick.

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lovecanbereal
Mick, thanks for your comment, always appreciated...
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