FINDING MY WAY

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Oct 2011 475 Views 16 comments

FINDING MY WAY

Author: Unknown

HE IS SO SMOOTH WITH HIS GAME
AFTER A TASTE OF IT I WANT MORE OF THE SAME

IS ANOTHER BITE TRULY WISE
BECAUSE IN THE PAST IT JUST LED TO LIES

MY HEART I HAVE SO CLOSED OFF
BUT NOW TO LIFE IT SHUDDERS AND COUGHS

IS HE WORTHY OF MY CHARM
WILL HE CAUSE ME ANY HARM

TO AND FRO MY MIND DOES GO
WHICH WAY IT WILL CHOOSE I DON'T KNOW

IN LIFE IF YOU FEEL NO PAIN
THEN NO JOY YOU WILL GAIN

SO WITH MY HEART OPEN WIDE
LIKE THIS I THINK I WILL ABIDE

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Posted: Oct 2011

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breathless22Bloomington, Illinois USAOct 22, 2011

nice write here lucy777 wow the hurt lngers on and on forget me not is hard to do good write wth good exspressions [let go] eneath the wind let a pile of colored leaves low awa with him....

breathless22Bloomington, Illinois USAOct 22, 2011

beneath the wind under apile of colored leaves to bury th hurt my friend I feel you sorry my typo errers on the first comment I left for you...Good write good exspressions to share

lucy777OPgunbarrel city, Texas USAOct 22, 2011

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it

CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAOct 22, 2011

Life is full of risks when we open up our heart. But so lonely if we guard to closely. Very nicely written, Lucy.

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

With courage you chose to keep an open mind and heart. Bravo!

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 22, 2011

IN LIFE IF YOU FEEL NO PAIN
THEN NO JOY YOU WILL GAIN

Such true words...if we never know sorrow...how will we know joy? Poignant write.

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKOct 22, 2011

Hi Lucy

This is a most poignant write: The questions you ask are largely rhetorical, you have already decided that your heart will remain open wide.

A really fine poem...

Bill

lucy777OPgunbarrel city, Texas USAOct 22, 2011

Thank all of you very much

AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 3, 2011

Thank you for sharing this Lucy

MycallingCork, IrelandNov 4, 2011

Very true write...be brave and soldier on

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USANov 6, 2011

{IN LIFE IF YOU FEEL NO PAIN
THEN NO JOY YOU WILL GAIN} This made me think of the garth brooks song The Dance. If you do not know it you should google it and read the words. I loved your poem it reminds me so much of me.