Weeping Rose

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Oct 2011 939 Views 21 comments

The Weeping Rose

Author: cafetwo2010

Under a burning sky
of misty morn
Diamond tears on roses
form
Dewdrops falling in sad
farewell
Peddles wilting in
summers swell
Beauty untold by
writers pen
Fades to twilight at
seasons end
And though her teardrops
kiss a loving hand
The weeping rose shall
rise again~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Oct 2011

About this poem:

Another seasonal poem..

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Comments (21)

lucy777gunbarrel city, Texas USAOct 22, 2011

AWW... SWEET POEM CAFE LOVE IT!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty Lucy..' Thaks much dear.

CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAOct 22, 2011

Love the happy ending. Always good things yet to come. Very nice write, Cafe.

Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKOct 22, 2011

The Weeping Rose by cafetwo
Thankyou for an insighted view of
Sad! Yet hopeful!! A superb expressed write
The beauty as summer fading & folding.
"And though her teardrops"
"kiss a loving hand"
"The weeping rose shall
"rise again"

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 22, 2011

What a lovely poem cafe...beautiful title too. "The Weeping Rose"

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty cloudy..' Can't leave the ladies crying..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty.Maxeen..' I don't write to many poems down but these last two I was trying to put together like a jigsaw puzzle.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty Odette..' I've planted a thousand of these roses in your garden. But they'll be smiling in the spring.

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandOct 22, 2011

Exquisite, lovely weeping rose!

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKOct 22, 2011

Hi cafe

Thelma has taken the very word from my lips... I was going to say "exquisite"... So I must content myself with merely observing that this is a beautiful poem...

Best wishes

Bill

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty thelma..' A rose for you sweet!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty Mr. Fellsman..' I guess it wouldn't be right to send Thelma to bed without her milk and cookies after using your chosen word. Since both of you thought of the same thing I must reply with an exquisite 'thank you.'

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAOct 22, 2011

Cafe, this poem has the substance of quality to declare yourself a true PROFESSIONAL POET!!! This is most certainly a poem worthy of being published!!! An AWESOME piece of poetic perfection!!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty Swade..' I seem to do a bit better if I actually take the time to write things out first, or at least work with a few lines on paper. I'm not sure but mabey my focus is getting more settled or something. Thank you my good friend.

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaOct 23, 2011

Yes, Cafe, I think you made a point in your last comment: all what you say about ther focus "getting more settled" is right and paper surely helps: it has a substance making you concentrate on what you write. "Written word remains," as the saying goes. This is an "exquisite" write - I can't help reiterating my fellow poets. It remains to wish you further progress. Many thanks for sharing!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 23, 2011

Ty Marikia..' Thank you dear for the most encouraging words. Complete focus is definately helped by writing for it exacts ones thinking.

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaOct 1, 2017

The Weeping Rose

Author: cafetwo2010

Under a burning sky
of misty morn
Diamond tears on roses
form.
Dewdrops falling in sad
farewell,
Peddles wilting in
summer's swell.
Beauty untold by
writer's pen
Fades to twilight at
season's end,
And though her teardrops
kiss a loving hand,
The weeping rose shall
rise again.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 23, 2011

Yes, it's a sad farewell, Cafe, but the message of hope contained in the last line - the
message you've been carrying along through your poetry - we need it dearly now at this hour of distress! Rest in peace!

online today!

godsprincessOwego, New York USAOct 1, 2017

Marikia - thank you for bringing this beautiful message from Cafe back for those of us who are grieving. How very appropriate at this time.

Kathy

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAOct 2, 2017

Just lovely thoughts, from your brilliant mind
Thanks my dear friend for all these lines.

And as tears meet the ground
My eyes swell fresh of tears
As my heart frowns

You're forever be remembered and your lines will always shine in our minds.

online today!

godsprincessOwego, New York USAJul 9, 2020

So beautiful and I think of the many poems more you could have written if given more time. So missed and so loved.

Kathy