Eternal Things

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Nov 2011 567 Views 17 comments

Eternal Things

Author: cafetwo2010

Eternal things touch my
moments like a fragrance
of honeysuckle
From what world beyond is
my spirit graced by the
mystic kiss of life?
I dare not understand, but
I patiently wait for the
touch
I know I am not mocked
though I am clothed in this
humble tent of mortal flesh
In my moments dim, eternal
things trickle into my inmost
being as the breath of a summers
night, or the sheen of a womans
hair filling this void like a
pool of strawberry champagne
Eternal things come and go..
yet I wait..for love~

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Posted: Nov 2011

About this poem:

One of those moments..

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Comments (17)

breathless22Bloomington, Illinois USANov 17, 2011

Cafetwo2010, Great write my friend

Eternal things come and go..
yet I wait..for love~
wow do we not all wait for this

How true and a wonderful write this is......

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 17, 2011

Ty Breathless..' Glad you stopped by. Thank you dear for the kind words.

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaNov 17, 2011

Hi Cafe,

A beautiful poem with lovely sensuous imagery. Thanks for sharing.

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandNov 17, 2011

Truly beautiful Cafe. We have to appreciate eternal and also fleeting things! Appreciation is a form of gratitude:

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaNov 17, 2011

waiting for love while eternal things are touching your moments... I think you are having nice time, cafe. Lovely poem, thanks.

AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 17, 2011

Beautiful moment, and poem

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 17, 2011

Ty Mac..*Thanks much bro.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 17, 2011

Ty Thelma* I can work with fleeting as long as it lasts forever.

Now I'm confused again. But hey.. I'm a guy.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 17, 2011

Ty vyoleta* Shhhhh! You might give my secret away.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 17, 2011

Ty Ayhra* Do they even make strawberry champagne?

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 17, 2011

Beautiful sensual poem cafe.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 17, 2011

Ty Odette* Us knights have to steal you away from Byron. All this two-timing just has to stop.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USANov 17, 2011

What a patient thought. they do say anything worth having is worth waiting for.

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaNov 17, 2011

Spiritul and romantic all
rolled into one. You dog
CafeTwo.

kickit22auburn, Washington USANov 17, 2011

cafe cafe cafetwo for what more do you need the old hag loves you so. if in time that don't work out I do wish you the best hope it is not long for love will show it's face in your direction.

kickit.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 18, 2011

Ty boy6* There's a dog in every crowd as they say. But the old hag put me back on the chain..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 18, 2011

Ty kickit* The old hag wants to ride accross country with you in your truck and I have encouraged her greatly. You can pick her up at the bus stop. I told her she didn't have to be home this year, or the next. In fact, I told her I had a lil 75 year business trip and if I wasen't around when she returned..well you could have her.