We sat on the end of the warf when the ocean was still as glass We were enveloped in thick fog with only the scent of salt air and the occassional squawk of a gull Your toes dipping in the water Our chuckles encapsulated in our own tiny bubble of time There are no stars to enchant No sun to bless Merely our own motions The move of love~
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 23, 2011
Sweet, romantic poem cafe2 :)
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 23, 2011
Thank you maiden..
lucy777gunbarrel city, Texas USANov 23, 2011
a wonderful romantic write Cafe You are sure putting out some excellent poetry lately. It is winter here but it must be spring at the castle!!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 23, 2011
TY Lucy** The temperature at the castle is set to 100 degrees..
thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandNov 23, 2011
Your Move of Love is beautiful, a lovely piece that leaves much for the imagination.
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKNov 23, 2011
Move of love by: cafetwo2010 your write Cafe has a very Imaginative and peaceful feeling to it .. also a deep stillness .. really lovely write
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 23, 2011
We sat on the end of the warf when the ocean was still as glass We were enveloped in thick fog with only the scent of salt air and the occassional squawk of a gull Her toes dipping in the water Our chuckles encapsulated in our own tiny bubble of time There were no stars to enchant No sun to bless Merely our own motions The move of love~
See what I mean...you just don't let up...do you? love it though...don't stop till I have had enough.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 23, 2011
Ty Odette** It is in the International Book of Knights,Chapter 7..article 12: No knight shall tease a fair maiden beyond her capacity to 'deal with stuff.' Well dear since you gave me such a wonderful tribute..we've decided to put some extra 'stuff' on your plate this week..
Comments (13)
by: cafetwo2010
your write Cafe has a very
Imaginative and peaceful feeling to it ..
also a deep stillness ..
really lovely write
the warf when the ocean
was still as glass
We were enveloped in thick
fog with only the scent of
salt air and the occassional
squawk of a gull
Her toes dipping in the water
Our chuckles encapsulated in
our own tiny bubble of time
There were no stars to enchant
No sun to bless
Merely our own motions
The move of love~
See what I mean...you just don't let up...do you? love it though...don't stop till I have had enough.
Absolutely beautiful !
Mady
Mady..
Thank you ladies ( ! ).
Cafe