A transcontinental glance, from a messiah in his blue suede pants. Sing daddy sing, and ride the star that made the dream. What is there is not for us to see, but for us unseen is what soon shall be. So, count your cards and bluff the builder, who made the strain that one day kills her. Build a bomb to bomb the wrong, while the cricket plays his same sad song. Yesterday has gone away, to help tomorrow die, that’s what they say. Or said the queen who helped the rabbit, shoot back up that same old habit. And in the end all things will die, glitter and fade like the empty sky.
Blizza, as mighty as the sword is, i've read most of your work, an with great admiration how you collective flow. Truly your writing impresses the hell outta me. Cheers an I hope you continue in words:)
LovelySereneKansas City, Kansas USASep 24, 2009
Its sad but I really liked it
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaSep 24, 2009
yes true it is sad , but stil great u do as always , u have rare way in ur writting , thanks for all ur good shares here
SunnnValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 24, 2009
I agree with Bentlee and Poetengineer
You are Great Poet, Bizza!
Please my mind with more of your work!
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 24, 2009
Brilliantly written again Blizza.I like your poem
Blizza801OPBillings, Montana USASep 24, 2009
wow...thank you all so much. I never shared my writings much...this is actually the first time some of these have ever been read by others...I'm glad that you all enjoy and I will keep writing =)
SunnnValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 24, 2009
Blizza, you have a unique style and huge talent! I am your fan from the first verses of yours I read.
Blizza801OPBillings, Montana USASep 24, 2009
Thank you..I am very glad to have you as a fan of mine !!!
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Life may be tough...
I cried, I laughed...
I died, I raised...
I ran, I chased...
And how not to love this life?
It's the Only life I have...
You are Great Poet, Bizza!
Please my mind with more of your work!
I never shared my writings much...this is actually the first time some of these have ever been read by others...I'm glad that you all enjoy and I will keep writing =)