On the thresh hold of a forgotton dream Thinkin' bout what that might bring Something burried deep within Time has come to begin again The endless tide won't wait forever Time to rid this word called never~
i think hope is what keeps us alive as we strive for our dreams and goles in life good one cafe
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 19, 2012
Ty Renbud' Most appreciated..
poppyredsydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 19, 2012
Who thinks up all these words.?Such a harmless little word to look at . And yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such Power to Deflate.I squish it under my feet.With Big Boots!!! Forever there is Hope.Look up and SEE Love all your poetry.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandApr 19, 2012
A lovey title cafetwo,that one can interpret in different ways,forget the threshold of a forgotten dream and step onto the threshold of a new reality a new era of change to enter the door to happiness,peace and love.Its time to erase never and think of forever.
I will use it just one time if you don't mind...with a positive spin.
A Castle without the beautiful maidens? Never.
I realy like this poem cafe.
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAApr 21, 2012
John, you took the letters right out of my mouth!
VERY Nice contribution Jim!! "EXCELLENT!!"
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 21, 2012
TY Poppy' Time to leave Never Never land..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 21, 2012
TY lucy' Peace in Texas dear..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 21, 2012
Ty Mac' This one anyone can apply anyway they want..hopefully in a postive way..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 21, 2012
TY Ondos' I agree bro..We must 'Never' have a castle wanting of the beautiful maidens..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 21, 2012
Ty swade' I see you are' Per-Swaded!'
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaApr 21, 2012
While there' life... There's hope. Lovely poem
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 21, 2012
On the thresh hold of a forgotton dream Thinkin' bout what that might bring Something burried deep within Time has come to begin again The endless tide won't wait forever Time to rid this word called never~
Cafe... Without hope... we have nothing... Lovely poem dear.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMay 3, 2012
lovely title, nostalgic write...
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 3, 2012
Nice and poignant poem cafe2. You know what they say: "While there's life, there's hope"
Tkd501Norwich, Norfolk, England UKMay 3, 2012
Wow cafetwo2010 That has got to be one of my favorites Great write buddy an even better read! You are my personal favorite poet on this site Keep them coming and i will happily keep on reading!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMay 5, 2012
I'm much humbled TKd501..A real thrill to hear you like my poems..I'm not as polished as many as the great poets who write here, but will always try to express whatever comes to mind in whatever words seem to fit. Thanks much my friend.
Comments (19)
Great sentiment in this one with a very profound message.
Gone!.. Done..
I will use it just one time if you don't mind...with a positive spin.
A Castle without the beautiful maidens? Never.
I realy like this poem cafe.
VERY Nice contribution Jim!! "EXCELLENT!!"
a forgotton dream
Thinkin' bout what that
might bring
Something burried deep
within
Time has come to begin
again
The endless tide won't
wait forever
Time to rid this word
called never~
Cafe... Without hope... we have nothing... Lovely poem dear.
That has got to be one of my favorites
Great write buddy an even better read!
You are my personal favorite poet on this site
Keep them coming and i will happily keep on reading!