by adjhematteson, Illinois, USA
Jul 2012 311 Views 9 comments
my try?? Haiku challendge
The Snow falls softly
it leaves a layer of lace
on natures canvas.
The snow glistens in
the moonlight as if to
make the tree shine bright
I do not know if i did this right but i thought i would give it a go
!!!!!!PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK I NEED IT!!!!!
it leaves a layer of lace
on natures canvas.
The snow glistens in
the moonlight as if to
make the tree shine bright
I do not know if i did this right but i thought i would give it a go
!!!!!!PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK I NEED IT!!!!!
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Posted: Jul 2012
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Comments (9)
I love the image of snow as a layer of lace on natures canvas. Very nice!
Love it my friend..
Windy
Nice haiku!