Waiting for you

by EliRoseWarsaw, Indiana, USA

Oct 2012 539 Views 7 comments

Waiting for you

Waiting for you
Jonathon Elias Crace

I count the hours,
I count the days.
How much I miss you,
I count the ways.
I miss your voice,
I miss your touch.
And I miss the face,
That I love so much.
How to describe it,
There is no way.
I walk around,
In a permanent daze.
I long to feel,
Your warm embrace.
And to see that smile,
Upon your face.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Oct 2012

About this poem:

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Comments (7)

CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAOct 16, 2012

First, welcome to Poet's Corner. I have read several of your postings and have enjoyed. If I may give a bit of advice to you, perhaps if you gave a different title to each one, even a slight variation you may get more responses and reads. The way you have posted it appears you posted the same one over and over again. Just a thought.

Again, welcome to the corner and will watch for new postings.

lesly1122lenoir, North Carolina USAOct 19, 2012

Amazing!

snowytopargyle, Manitoba CanadaOct 19, 2012

How wonderful is the emotion portrayed by your lovely poem.I can feel you beaming with thoughts of love
for a very special someone in your life. Well done !!!

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 20, 2012

I've read some ,i'll answer some ,this one is very good. ..welcome my friend and next time ,a nice title to go wit it ..

EliRoseOPWarsaw, Indiana USAOct 25, 2012

Sorry everyone for the lack of Titles, They have them just not where they were supposed to be, I've edited all of them, And thank you everyone for comments :D N sadly to say no, i'm actually a pretty lonely person. I don't do much with anyone... :/ Tis okey dooley though :D

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 25, 2012

I long to feel,
Your warm embrace.
And to see that smile,
Upon your face.

Beautiful romantic poem.