What scours your consciousnes and where have you gone wrong? Why must you sigh and frown when the world slips right on by? When good times were old times? When you were young and fair? What happenned to wanting to make a few new friends? We are all worn down by age And who hasn't had bad experiences but if we stay crippled with broken wings when will we ever try and fly again? The spirit of youth is ageless Happiness of life is always near so just get outside of your own fear Pretend and be childlike again and learn to love from deep inside and share your innocence again.
BilliegirlNotre-dame de la Salette, Quebec CanadaAug 19, 2011
Very nice write and so true
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAAug 19, 2011
Great write Yank..'Your poem reminds me of how children are before the nagativity of the world closes in on them..The way children are is always the tell tale sign to us adults that the natural and healthy state of mind is that of child like innocence which can believe and trust unquestionably and yet still possess great knowledge..
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKAug 20, 2011
The spirit of youth is ageless Happiness of life is always near so just get outside of your own fear Pretend and be childlike again and learn to love from deep inside and share your innocence again.
An excellent poem and so true, I say we should never lose sight of the child within us however old we are.
Thank you all so much........this one is very special for me....as a rough ride this world is soemtimes....and throws us from the saddle....we must always remember to overcome fear of being bucked and just climb back up and take control of the reins of life and live life to its fullest....ride on!!!
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Happiness of life is always near
so just get outside of your own fear
Pretend and be childlike again
and learn to love from deep inside
and share your innocence again.
An excellent poem and so true, I say we should never lose sight of the child within us however old we are.