Is the weight of a ring to heavy for your finger? For a long time my heart suffered as your love linger! You could never have been heaven sent, you must be the devil’s charity! I curse the day we met, why Cupid couldn't be out off arrows?
Erase the memories of when our love brought sweat and the taste of each other’s flesh so I could swallow the bitterness of regret making this so much sweeter.Let the miscarriage of trust bleed through the wounds that were carved into my soul and drown the pain in a sea of sorrows with a hope that there will be no tomorrow.
It seems that I’m a neglected dog on the outside looking in! I feel like I’m barking wildly at the moon because I want to be heard, But nothing I do is ever good enough for you. The chapter of our life together can not be rewritten, so burn the pages in that book of lies.
I pray that every breath I take would be my last, so the rhythm of my beating heart could cease to be heard. Please death come on swift wings, not hesitant feet and murder this heart of mine which has love for you!
If my life will appease your hunger, “PLEASE TAKE IT” If my blood will quench your thirst, “PLEASE DRINK IT” If this is the price of your happiness, “PLEASE ENJOY IT”
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 24, 2012
I'm very much dogmying ...i mean enjoying this .... But with the last phrases ...are you against death or your X ? Or both ....?
poppyredsydney, New South Wales AustraliaNov 24, 2012
The passionate hurting of you jumps out at me in your poetry.I enjoyed reading it.But please NO ONE,NO ONE at ALL is worth your life.You are much too valuable.Just because she might not appreciate you someone else will.I ENJOYED THIS.
IvoryPetalsOPArima, Borough of Arima Trinidad and TobagoNov 24, 2012
dont worry i'm not going to kill myself! the poem welcome's death to escape the pain!
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USANov 24, 2012
Ivory Petals, every words and every line is an expression of a very deep hurt and misery. But we all through sometimes if not most often. I was so deep at one time in this page of my life but it is a feeling that will make every other part of emotion greatly appreciated. Once we get out of it and start healing, the growth we processed ourselves with is most gratifying. If it makes sense. I just hope that you wouldn't dwell far too deep in this stage.
Such a very poignant write. Take care.
Is the weight of a ring to heavy for your finger? For a long time my heart suffered as your love linger! You could never have been heaven sent, you must be the devil’s If my life will appease your hunger, “PLEASE TAKE IT” If my blood will quench your thirst, “PLEASE DRINK IT” If this is the price of your happiness, “PLEASE ENJOY IT”
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the poem welcome's death to escape the pain!
Such a very poignant write. Take care.
Is the weight of a ring to heavy for your finger?
For a long time my heart suffered as your love linger!
You could never have been heaven sent, you must be the devil’s
If my life will appease your hunger, “PLEASE TAKE IT”
If my blood will quench your thirst, “PLEASE DRINK IT”
If this is the price of your happiness, “PLEASE ENJOY IT”