gone are the days when the wars were just post up another puppet for the national lust broken are the bows of the norman kings atomic war threatens leavin nothin to glean torn are the hearts of every true love while dna carries on the most ruthless blood here and there hide like pockets of gold the sweetest love stories that have ever been told like dreams of the gold rush crowds rally to mine but many search for honey where theres no hive to find somewhere in the journey one looks up to pray only to find their mind has powers to help shape the way amidst all the struggle a spark of hope our day will come
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Posted: Jan 2013
About this poem:
i love poetry, i saw this link and wanted to be a part of it, so i started a fresh work, but nothing perhaps that hasnt been said before in other ways, cheers
velvet and elo, thank you. I will continue to write as I gain inspiration. Poetnumber1, thank you! my grandpa came from havana, cuba, one of your neighbor islands. your comment holds a special place in my heart. God greet you more and more.
Dave, *YOUR POETRY IS PROFOUND! You Hit the Nail on the Head regarding how much our society has changed compared to the Days of Merry Olde England when we were not so IMPERIALISTIC & Justice was in vogue. I love your Down to Earth Style. You managed to Paint a Vivid Picture without the Brush, just like my Poet Buddy, Poetnumber1 from Trinidad... *I look forward to more of your Fascinating Poems. All the Best, Kate
smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 14, 2013
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We are all very different but find ways to write so that we can share those thoughts with others in a way we hope they will understand.
"torn are the hearts of every true love"
Yes indeed in battles of all kinds heats get torn, on the fields of war and at home....
Well written, thankyou.
Poetnumber1, thank you! my grandpa came from havana, cuba, one of your neighbor islands. your comment holds a special place in my heart. God greet you more and more.
Love your poetry Dave
*YOUR POETRY IS PROFOUND! You Hit the Nail on the Head regarding how much our society has changed compared to the Days of Merry Olde England when we were not so IMPERIALISTIC & Justice was in vogue. I love your Down to Earth Style. You managed to Paint a Vivid Picture without the Brush, just like my Poet Buddy, Poetnumber1 from Trinidad...
*I look forward to more of your Fascinating Poems.
All the Best,
Kate
Thanks for sharing. This is mostly my theme
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