Un Poquito

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Mar 2013 851 Views 19 comments

Un Poquito

Author: Spartacus2012

Her love began
as a little bit
then slowly
started to snowball...

She appeared
as a snowflake...

Gently descending
upon my hill
beginning to roll
slowly downwards...

With sculpting hands
clumped her together
three dimensional affections
length, depth and width...

Rolled and clumped
she took form...

Silly carrot for nose
two chocolate chip
cookies for eyes
a raisin smile...

Little by little
I love her more each day...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Mar 2013

About this poem:

mi princesa Jocelyn...

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Comments (19)

watersandthewildCoast, Donegal IrelandMar 7, 2013

Great gear changes
My fav of yours Ken,
Ru

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMar 7, 2013

beautifully penned love in each and every word ty for sharing

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 7, 2013

Thank you Ru..Comment well received...Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 7, 2013

Thank you Shadow..You are most kind...Ken

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKMar 7, 2013

I agree with Ru..

very cleaver use of imagery here Ken, marvellous!

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 7, 2013

Thank you my ladymorgana..Delighted you liked it..Ken

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMar 7, 2013

Yes they are all right, clever imagery.
Rob

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 7, 2013

Thank you Rob..Good to have you as a poet friend...Ken

SundaySilenceLittle Gasparilla, Florida USAMar 7, 2013

Holy cow...I'm melting.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 7, 2013

Thank you Sunday..You are most kind...Ken

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 7, 2013

Well done ken,she is a lucky woman to have you.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 7, 2013

Thank you Poetnumber1...You are a valued friend...I am proud to call you a poet friend...Ken

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAMar 7, 2013

Hi, Spartacus2012,
...three dimensional affections length, depth and width... It's delightful when love takes its own time and shape - as did the poet's verse.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 7, 2013

Thank you gnj4u..Your kind commentary is well received..Ken

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAMar 7, 2013

This snowball rolled right through my front door..A creative romantic
you are. Any more of these and the ladies will be shining your
T-Rex cowboy boots.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 7, 2013

Thank you cafe..I thank God for the love I have discovered..Life without a lover and best friend is like a broken pencil, pointless..Thanks friend...Ken

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 8, 2013

I love her more each day, is a statement that attest the growth of affection as time passes by. Great feelings Ken to nourish such a love that keeps on growing.

Take care,

Phyllis